It is a very interesting story. Especially the magic system is different and unusual. I like it very much. The story is written in third person, therefore we can read the stories and thoughts of all important characters. This makes the story more interesting. I am very excited to read more. Keep up the good work:)

I think that the story is very exciting. I can't wait for the next chapters and I also want to know what's outside. It's a fun read. Great work!