Roland_Batchelder
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can we get alittle more story in these 2 chapter releases maybe? I'm getting to the point of being completely exhausted with the wait and the anticlimactic distribution of the story and as a day one reader that saddens me because this was one of my favorite novels to read here and I don't look forward to giving this book up
it seems the haven will have to assimilate enough fruits of existence to become its own haven seperate from vacous and vitalis of course, for its records to trully be its own and only then would it be able to house such an entity as the extremity of extremes. however I wonder if he may take them all into himself to wade across the waters between havens as he did with the seas of ruination
where are the daolinesđ
so many author mistakes man, take notes on your characters and equipment qualities and attributes as well as reconsidering completely unrealistic calculations of distance. all in all great story but bad execution
this was supposed to be 300 omni points.... you should really keep notes Bout the developments of your chapters