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understandable, but he was not made to understand the na'vi culture, he was made to be the perfect being in survival on earth and in pandora. I know that Dr. Grace taught him the Na'vi culture to the point of mastering it, at least theoretically, but for him it is nothing more than information about a culture.
Understandable, but despite the fact that it would have been a real problem if an artery or a vein was severely damaged or any other part necessary for the body in a survival environment, that is precisely what this series of tests of himself was used to be able to see his abilities or limits that his body really had and if for some reason it was damaged it would regenerate (call it the plot buff). The scientists taught him some survival and more dr.grace on the planet of pandora and from what he has seen nothing is truly a problem for his integrity, but in reality he did not know anything about his abilities other than that he was stronger, faster , smarter, more resistant but he didn't know until he limited and that intrigued him.
Understandable, the character is stupid for you, any suggestions to improve it, just clarify I'm new to writing and I don't have the slightest idea how to write a story, that's why I'm doing it. What I can see you dislike is why he killed something in front of a Na'vi, it's understandable that you think that because the Na'vi have a highly spiritualistic culture regarding nature and their distaste for unnecessary hunting by at least in the culture of the ometecaya. But what I tried at least was to demonstrate his abilities and that if he attacked him he would at least defend himself, apart from Dr. Grace he knows his culture but he doesn't care because before him they are nothing more than strangers with a spiritual culture.
understandable, the character is stupid, any suggestions to improve it, just clarify I'm new to this writing and well I have no idea how to write a story that's why I'm doing it. What I can see that you don't like is the reason why they tried to break the bones in a survival situation, but the idea that I tried to capture was that I was trying to understand his body to see how resistant it was and anyway one of his many abilities are super regeneration and he knew it (I think that ability did not explain it much)
Es una historia con una calidad de escritura muy incoherente y mucho más porque usa el Google traductor, casi no actualiza, su desarrollo de la historia deja mucho a que desear, su personaje principal lo hizo muy dominado rápidamente por lo que casi no hay desarrollo de personaje y en cuanto al contexto general por lo menos sabe algo del lore de avatar
This is basically what I think of the trumpet and flute
This is basically what I think of guitar
The design of the house
aqui decia cria y depues lo que muchos llamaria bebe
This would be his na'vi version among his many abilities from different species he obtained the one to change form between the human and the na'vi the one on the cover would be the human this is the version mature, use your imagination for a smaller one and childish
Pues yo lo leo con google traductor asi que no sabria decir que tan bueno es la calidada de la escritura pero a lo que va la historia es buena con un comienzo bueno no le queria dar una oportunidad por que pense que hiba a ser un ff generico de teenwolf pero no tambien contiene series que conozco y que se me hacen entretenidas pór el momento para mi es una buena historia
10/10 con una calidad de escritura y trama excelente y un desarrollo de personaje aún más. Lo único que si me sorprendió fue el cambio de trama a fantasiosa con ángeles demonios y demás a una más normal (aunque sigue habiendo temas fantasiosos) pero fuera de eso esta interesante ya que es como si fuera una novela cualquiera pero con personajes que todos conocemos y de otros animes o mangas
if i remember correctly kayden said 3 of the 10 best in the world