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Oh, that's what he meant. But I don't know what this law is. I guess, I have to read a bit more.
what does that even mean? I will get my law?
You mean "I will settle the score with you" right? 🌚
Can't feel what he's feeling. 🤔 It might be life-threatening, yet it feels not so dangerous.
It's no fun when the quests are so easy and not life-threatening at all. 🤔 People might get bored at a point because of this. Should've been more creative to create quests that might be interesting and thrilled to read. This is just boring. 🙄
If you're writing in first pov format, you should write the dialogues in that way too. Try reading some first pov novels to get an idea how they write and describe things along the way.
who's her?
too much info dump. I'm getting bored again. 🙄
👀geez...
bruh, where's the collans? 👀
Extra Large 🌚
Would you like to experience it yourself? 😄
Don't know about this chapter. Too much abuse is shown and the plot with Zion guy is too cliche with too much violence. I just wonder why the old man doesn't complain about this matter to the village chief or any knight. beating mc is okay but beating even old men is crossing the line. How come no one is raising an issue about this. old man and mc seem cowardish but also dumb at the same point. just because the plot wants a villain in the story for mc to grow, doesn't mean any plot is okay with no logic. 🙄
oh, should've said yi-yun's mother or her adopted mother. 🤔
now, I know. thanks, smart@$$.
is he delusional? 🥲
quiet"
seems like thriller movie