man what you've done with this book is so great. keep up the good work you're you chapters give me something to be excited about.

really hope everyone makes it back to the village kind of worried that naruto is going to get captured

why didn't Roy ask him how to undue the curse?

liking the exam shake things up dude

I like that even though he's imprisoned he still helps the leaf 👍

If you are on the fence about this book, just give it a chance. I've read a lot of Naruto fanfics, and very few are written well and make sense. After that, you're lucky for a solid update. This book hits all the marks. You won't regret reading it, I promise.

if I had more stones I'd give it. The way the third and danzo are wrote is 👌 so many fanfics make the third evil and danzo even worse than cannon keep up the good work

take my stones man this book is too good

man such a wholesome chapter keep up the good work 👍

man I love this book keep up the good work 👍

Nice, so the Uchiha massacre didn’t happen. Also, Sakura with Guy? I can’t wait to see how that turns out. 👍

I sometimes feel like your paragraphs are getting moved around. Shouldn't this be up before he leaves the magical creature shop?

I hope he uses the wind control jutsu on the rasenshuriken so it Flys around like a helicopter

shouldn't it be kushina who gets the first kill since she older and going to the academy?

what was his animal form again? Been a minute since I read

writing*

BTW love how your righting this. it's so nice to have a rinnegan user not be op but still show he's getting there keep up the good work👍👍

so hoping fujin teaches him during the chunin exam brake

you didn't drop this did you?

wouldn't they already know each other?