this book is very good and you can tell that author has spent a lot of time writing each chapter, they have a well thought out plan for the book Direction and they have spent time developing each character, this is one of my favourite books and has made me want to start writing again, I would like to thank the author for that.

I have not stopped it is life has changed for me right now and still trying to find my feet

rip

The story is very well written and the author does a very good job at not making the main charter op and sticking to the story, it is well written with a few mistakes.

great story it is in it's early stages so can't give this book a full review but I say that it is going in the right direction, there are some spelling mistakes but the aurther is getting better, keep up the great work

love it

I think you story is great and I think the book you are writing is going in the right Direction

Love you work hop you can keep it up

love your work man and can't wait for Arc 2

love the chapter

loving the story

love the chapter

don't push your man if are sick just focus on getting better, so that your work and you health don't take a nosedive

love the chapter

thanks for the chapter

love the chapter man. keep up the good work

Do what you need to do man this is a great book and I'm will to weight

his hole body is made out of a living metal. but his body still does have some flesh but it is slowly being replaced by the living metal that is why his transformations have a time limit to them.

sorry I was very tired when I did that and just through out some very rough numbers

thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work mate