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A_N_Crestmore

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2020-08-03 JoinedCanada
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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore2yr
    Commented

    Its funny how he’s comparing his new life to webnovels, very meta

    'Black and purple uh.. so I have Dark and space element, 2 rare element affinity, looks like it will be the heaven defying genius MC plot, next I will get rank 50 processor I guess', lark smirked as he was thinking what the future plot is going to be
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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore2yr
    Commented

    I like the system for processors, like a secondary organ to the brain. Interested in seeing how the idea is fleshed out and expanded upon

    Ch 1 Sudtrailen
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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore2yr
    Commented

    With so many people it makes sense that they would be forced into their career based on their processor.

    Outer territory consists of weakest people a.k.a. peasents, people with processor rank 1-15 live in this territory, people here are the poorest and they receive only primary education, due to the enormous population of 98 trillion and enormous food intake, it is mandatory for these people to work in agriculture, some may also work in industries but everyone work in agriculture atleast as a side job
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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore2yr
    Commented

    I like the society’s ranking system, especially the rank of ruler

    Hierarchy of people in this world is Monarch, Ruler, Duke, Marquess, Earl, Viscount, Baron, commoners, peasents
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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore2yr
    Commented

    Thats a really unique idea, I like it a lot. It makes me think these people are aliens

    In this world every children at the age of 10 will awaken their processor , processor is spherical shaped organ at the bottom of the brain, after the awakening ceremony the processor gets started and absorb the neutral energy in the air, every processor has a rank, and that rank will decide one's entire future, the rank of the processor determines the maximum level one can achieve in their entire life
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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore2yr
    Replied to Epitaffy

    Also i Thank you for the kind words, they truly mean a lot

    Ch 1 Willum
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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore2yr
    Replied to Epitaffy

    Dont worry, this story will most definitely be continued. I am working on the second arc as we speak, and it will be released most likely halfway through august

    Ch 1 Willum
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    A Knight’s Dream; The Belgarast Chronicles
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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore2yr
    Commented

    Loving it so far

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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore2yr
    Replied to Kera_wood

    OH hello! Sorry i didnt see your comments until now. id love to discuss this wIth you

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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore2yr
    Replied to madskie00017

    I have entered a long period of hiatus due to difficulties in my life, however now I have finally picked up the pen again and I will resume writing this story. Expect a proper update soon, and thank you for the kind comments, as it really means a lot to me.

    Ch 12 A New Order
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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore3yr
    Replied to XSIL3NCEX

    I believe when they first started introducing plate they had put it over chainmail but then after a while they stopped but I could be wrong?

    He tried to ask them for tips, but they shoved that responsibility to Frey. He couldn't talk to them in their free time either, as guards spent all day training. He waited for his chance, and today, that chance came. All the guards were lined up in formation, but none of them had the safety balls around their spears. Today, they all lined up and waited for orders. They all wore chain mail armor under a thick breastplate with a rose etched on the front. Their helmet, arm guards, leg guards, and boots were all metal and worn. Doevm had received custom armor because everything was too big for him. Jameson was at the front, but he didn't start the drill.
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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore3yr
    Replied to Felix_Neros

    Actually not necessarily! Plate made for the soldiery often was mass produced and of lower quality, meaning the makers took on a mentality of “Some-sizes fit all”, with only a few sizes. Noble plate was completely custom and often made with a team of specialists and with much higher quality steel or metal. i hope this was helpful!

    He tried to ask them for tips, but they shoved that responsibility to Frey. He couldn't talk to them in their free time either, as guards spent all day training. He waited for his chance, and today, that chance came. All the guards were lined up in formation, but none of them had the safety balls around their spears. Today, they all lined up and waited for orders. They all wore chain mail armor under a thick breastplate with a rose etched on the front. Their helmet, arm guards, leg guards, and boots were all metal and worn. Doevm had received custom armor because everything was too big for him. Jameson was at the front, but he didn't start the drill.
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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore3yr
    Posted

    Very dynamic characters! Awesome story development and lore development! Really enjoyed how the werewolves work; what with a human and an “inner wolf” inhabiting the same body. something i havent seen before now! Awesome read! Well done! Recommend!

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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore3yr
    Commented

    Lol

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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore3yr
    Commented

    Oooooooo the person and wolf are seperate? Thats a cool idea! How they inhabit the same body but seem to be different

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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore3yr
    Commented

    Yay! Rare to see stories that arent in America or Europe mostly. Awesome!

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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore3yr
    Replied to MiaSilver

    Agreed

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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore3yr
    Posted

    Very nice story! Wow, the flow is great and i like how the MC is written and the first person POV helps to establish her personality. Excellent work, quite mysterious! I recommend this story to everyone who likes mystery novels. Amazing read! Well Written and the author does not pull punches!

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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore3yr
    Commented

    Lotta interruptions lol

    "Grace, my child! I see you have arrived." Someone interrupted my discovery of that feeling. 
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  • A_N_Crestmore
    A_N_Crestmore3yr
    Commented

    Love The added personality

    Yeah, I totally dislike her. 
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