Miistro
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A dude who likes to read, for he himself can not write.
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Miistro4dCommentedCh 65 64. Round Three- Miistro12dCommented
I think it's great; the changes you've made open up many opportunities.
Please tell me what you all thought of this chapter. It's packed full of set up for future arcs, as well as answering some questions. Please, please, please tell me what you think. I know that this chapter changes a lot of things from Fate Canon, especially with Alaya, and the Root. Please tell me your thoughts! - Miistro12dCommented"It's simple. I granted him his wish of reuniting his family, and it's turned him into a monster." She answered.
- Miistro22dPosted
Having read through the end of the first arc, I must say I have never been disappointed. Errors were hard to find, and any that did appear were quickly fixed. The character design for the main character is exceptional and blends seamlessly into the world. If I knew nothing about FATE and hadn't known it was fanfiction, I would have assumed it was part of the official FATE storyline. The writing quality is superb, with excellent pacing and story development. The author has outdone themselves, and I hope more readers find their story.
- Miistro22dCommentedCh 63 Update.
- Miistro1mthCommentedCh 60 60. Completely Outmatched
- Miistro1mthCommented"You're wrong." Godrick's deep voice rang through the reality marble, shocking everyone.
- Miistro1mthCommentedAs we stepped through the gates of the Solitude common district the the loud hubbub of the ducks slammed into us like a wall of noise and smell, except if the place could usually be compared to a complete mess that somehow ended up working, today it could quite easily be described as complete and utter chaos.
- Miistro2mthReplied to JTGTitan_96
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Something curious: For some damn reason, Stheno and Euryale in all their "glory" were considered more beautiful than Medusa... Man, Greek stuff is complicated... People with questionable tastes...