1 Chapter 1 : Minato Template (Rewrite)

<MC POV>

I am not sure why everything was dark. I did not have much energy either.

Every part of my body hurts.

I wanted to open my eyes but I could not. Maybe they are open but I don't think so.

I was crying, I could listen to my voice. But it was like I was a baby.

It was hard to even focus on something for more than a second.

I am so tired and my head hurts.

But I had to know what was going on. I had to focus.

I could feel I was lifted by someone.

I could hear them talk but could not for my life say what they were talking about.

Maybe Japanese, sounds a lot like the anime I used to watch.

I opened my eyes with much difficulty and the first thing I saw was a blur.

Everything was blurry and the light was hurting my eyes.

I was feeling sleepy.

I wanted to sleep and let go of this pointless struggle but something in my mind kept pushing me to open my eyes and see where I was.

Finally, after many tries and rubbing my eyes with my tiny hands, I could see clearly.

I saw a person looking at me with bright blue eyes. He was handsome with blonde hair and beautiful blue eyes.

When I looked around, I found a beautiful red-haired woman looking a little tired while staring at me and another baby in her arms.

A baby who was like the handsome man who was holding me right now.

Something came to my mind. Like I knew what going on but I could not focus at all.

The other child had 3 whisker marks on his cheeks.

<POV ENDS>

He knows where he is but for the good of his life, he could not focus on the thought.

It was like his thoughts were slipping through his clutches and kept away from him the more he thought about it.

"Kirito, Namikaze Kirito" was the only thing he could understand about what the man who was most probably his father was saying.

"Namikaze, " he had heard this name before but again he could not focus enough to remember when.

[Ding. System Template Set].

[Status inactive]

[Additional Power System Set]

[H***]

Before losing his focus and drifting into sleep, that was the only thing he saw but couldn't see the last part.

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-Time Skip 5 Years Later-

Konohagakure No Sato

Naruto Uzumaki and his brother Kirito Uzumaki were kicked out of the orphanage.

Both boys were 5 years old and had nowhere to go.

Both boys had fair skin, bright blonde hair and beautiful Blue eyes.

Naruto looks like his father Minato, but still has facial features like his mother Kushina and has whiskers marks on his cheeks.

Kirito however was a replica of Minato, his father.

Naruto was very sad and almost looked like he was about to cry.

Kirito on the other hand did not react.

Kirito being a traverser had the mind of an adult. He also remembered the plot of Naruto.

He knew that Naruto in the canon was kicked out of the orphanage but he did not know at which age.

He was looking forward to this.

When he turned 5 years old, his system was activated.

He remember hearing the system's voice once when he was little but could not tell whether it was his hallucination or reality.

But on his 5th birthday, the system was activated.

Or to be exact, Inactive.

[System Template Inactive]

This was the only thing he heard when he woke up on his 5th birthday.

He tried hard but could not activate his system.

The only thing he could think of for activating his system was his chakra.

Unlike his brother, Kirito has not used his chakra yet, or more exactly he is unable to draw chakra yet.

He tried when he was young but for some reason, he could not.

He was getting demotivated every day when he had no results after trying so hard.

But later he was glad that he did not infuse his chakra sooner.

Opening chakra sooner (like 2 or 3 years old) means getting into the ranks of geniuses and considering how Danzo kidnap kids (who show talent) like cookies inside a cookie jar. This is a really bad idea.

He doesn't yet know why Danzo did not take him away considering he is of Uzumaki descent.

Maybe a reason could be that, like his brother, he too is a Jinchuriki.

Minato sealed the Yang half of Kurama in Naruto while the Yin half was sealed in Kirito.

Kirito was not sure which was more worse, having the power of nine tails and getting ostracised by the entire village, or not having the power and getting taken by Danzo when Hokage wouldn't protect him.

'Okay, maybe the second one,' 

Well, not like he can change anything at this point anyways so f*ck it.

Maybe Kushina wasn't as aggressive as he has read in the anime? who knows.

'I mean which mother will be willingly let their child offer her child to become a vessel for a demon,' Kirito couldn't help but wonder.

The only good thing about this that Kirito was happy about was growing up like a normal person and not being hated by the people of Konoha. Or at least he thought that he would.

He is not sure why and how but the crazy people of this village think that he alongside his brother is the reincarnation of the demon fox.

'Total bullshit' There is no way that they can point out that Nine Tail chakra is inside them.

Not to mention, Even if there are rumours out there that they are the Jinchuriki of the Nine Tail. 

The knowledge about the difference between a Jinchuriki and a Biju should be available in the village.

At least the higher-ups of the village knew better. What they did to stop the civilians. 

Absolutely nothing.

And that is why he was under constant surveillance.

The Jinchurikis of the village.

But that is also why he was happy as he could now get out of the orphanage and learn how to draw his chakra without getting monitored by the Hokage.

How did he know that the people who watching him and his brother were Hokage's Anbu?

From a very young age, he could sense other people's emotions. He is not sure why especially when he did not even unlock his chakra yet but he could.

And he always could sense the emotion of a person near his brother.

He tested this by leaving his brother one time in the park and getting away.

And the Anbu did not follow him at all. Maybe because he is much less likely to fall into trouble than his brother and there was only one Anbu at that time.

And the matter that the Anbu is a person sent by Hokage is easy to guess.

There are only two forces in Konoha who will directly monitor the Jinchuriki of the village.

Hiruzen Sarutobi and Danzo Shimura.

And the fact that he could sense Emotions from the Anbu means that they are not root.

'Now I can finally unlock my chakra without getting monitored by the Hokage' thought Kirito.

He did not believe in Hiruzen Sarutobi at all.

He and his brother were kept in very inhuman conditions in the orphanage for as long as he can remember. The current Hokage did not do anything about it.

Especially when considering that both of them are the sons of the village heroes the 4th Hokage and his wife.

And Kirito refused to believe that Hiruzen did not know or could not do anything about it. Reason being.

One, he has an Anbu monitoring them.

And second, he is a freaking Hokage.

So no, Kirito Namikaze does not trust the Hokage or anyone for that matter.

Strange how Naruto in this world was always given the Name Uzumaki. It was done by Kushina and Kirito was given the name Namikaze. 

This makes matters more strange as Naruto's name came from Jiraiya which indirectly makes it come from Minato while Kirito's name was suggested by Kushina.

Like they were playing a game of " You suggest Half and Half will come from me," Kirito couldn't understand what they were thinking.

With this thought, Kirito kept on trying to infuse his chakra every day when he could get away from the Anbu.

Every day he could feel the power inside him getting stronger and was about to burst open but could not.

This goes on for a month.

In this month both Naruto and Kirito were living on the outskirts of the village.

Hunting and camping every day.

Life for them was hard but both of them worked hard and somehow survived.

Both Kirito and Naruto were hated by the villagers, not to mention they did not even sell them food or other important necessary items in the store.

Things were not physical to the extreme at least unlike how some fanfiction states.

But that does not mean they were completely unscratched.

Some villagers used to hurt them when no one was looking.

Kirito's hatred for them was intense but he had to hold back for the time being.

Kirito was again meditating.

Far away from Naruto to avoid the Anbu.

He was close he could feel it.

Today Kirito was feeling a massive chakra inside him. He was trying to pull that chakra so he could draw it.

After the 7th try, he was finally able to pull the chakra.

Instantly his whole body was covered with very dense blue chakra and he heard the sound of the system once again.

[Ding. System Template Activated]

[Instigating Minato Namikaze Template]

[All the related information being transferred into Host's Mind]

For some time Kirito felt all kinds of memories rushing to him and that was followed by intense pain.

[Ding. Transfer complete]

[Minato Template 1%]

[Ding. Congratulations host for activating the system.]

[Binding Nine Tail Chakra with Template Progress]

[Removing Nine Tail Consciousness]

[Current Usable Chakra 1%]

Kirito was stunned. He has the nine-tails chakra, he knows that. But what does binding it with a template mean?

Removing consciousness? does this mean now that this is his chakra he doesn't have to beg a mountain-size fox for chakra like his brother will have to do in the future?

Maybe he got this because he got Minato's template. Minato also got 9 tail yin chakra in the anime.

'Possible?'

Well, it does not matter, as long as he is getting stronger because even half of the nine-tail chakra is enough to reach super kage level power.

The problem is that his body cannot handle the power right now. Even 1% of Kurama's power.

But this also means that he has almost unlimited chakra for himself like his brother.

Maybe he can not use the power directly but he can use the power to increase his endurance and cast Jutsu after Jutsu.

'Naruto could have done that if he bothered to learn anything else than just Rasengan. Not like there is anything wrong with Rasengan but still,'

Now he has to plan what he will do in the future.

One thing for sure is that he is not going to get manipulated by others like his brother and father.

xxx

A/N : This is the first rewrite of the story. Super excited to do this. Almost felt like I was writing this story for the first time. 

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