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Joey_Allison

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  • Joey_Allison
    Joey_Allison3yr
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    the author told me to come check this out from the novel because he rewrote it, but I can't just can't I dislike how he describe the rewrite and I read a little bit and hated it. he took everything good and trashed it and multiplied the bad by 99999999. he also tried that new writer trick. which in my opinion is no excuse. there are hundreds of books pick that has a similar setting read it see how they wrote and start from that. I'm not ask you to copy them just get inspiration from it.

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    Leveling System In Another World
    Fantasy · PBOM2004
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  • Joey_Allison
    Joey_Allison3yr
    Replied to PBOM2004

    its just that I was really looking forward to a story. where the MC gets transported back to the start of the apocalypse. starts making preparation like building a base and helping people because he was bullied in the apocalypse. I also hate those evil MC where he go out just rape, murder, and steal for the fun of it. plus I like when Alice was shy to main character and a yandere to everyone else. I also don't get why you have the MC get the shit kick out him and than kill the guy who hurt in the most boring way possible. while i also agree that the MC was to powerful, but I like the MC to be to struggle but also strong if to win most fights

    Ch 62 Don't put power stones in this story.
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    Leveling System in Apocalypse World
    Action · PBOM2004
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  • Joey_Allison
    Joey_Allison3yr
    Commented

    why did you drop it. you could have just put it on the back burner and waited to you had time to write. I am sure everyone will understand.

    Ch 68 Sorry Guys...
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    HOTD: Legacy [DROPPED]
    Anime & Comics · TNT_Subho99
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  • Joey_Allison
    Joey_Allison3yr
    Replied to Fate_go_Player

    my main problem is that ever since you told us the grandma was going to be added I got really excited and then you turn around and have go out with another guy.

    Ch 124 Sorry 2
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    Reincarnated as leviathan
    Fantasy · Fate_go_Player
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  • Joey_Allison
    Joey_Allison3yr
    Commented

    I going to drop this novel because it has no harem, and I am not asking for a 100 girls. I want at least 5 or 6 girls and it also doesn't have be every chapter is something to do the harem. it could be once every 7 to 9 chapters. I am also not asking the scenes to be all r-18 and stuff .I just want some lovey dovey stuff. I now have to drop this story just because some pansies couldn't hand a harem.

    Ch 124 Sorry 2
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    Reincarnated as leviathan
    Fantasy · Fate_go_Player
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  • Joey_Allison
    Joey_Allison3yr
    Commented

    in the harem results you said you were going to add Christine after the gopher. why then did you make her go out with shin. I was so looking forward to her joining the harem.

    Ch 125 Happy morning
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    Reincarnated as leviathan
    Fantasy · Fate_go_Player
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  • Joey_Allison
    Joey_Allison3yr
    Commented

    yes I think she should be added to the harem

    Ch 118 Sorry
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    Reincarnated as leviathan
    Fantasy · Fate_go_Player
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  • Joey_Allison
    Joey_Allison3yr
    Posted

    I dont want to be rude but I really hate this author. the story was great and everything but he just dropped it, and he dropped every other story too. he said he was going to make another one never did or he deleted it and I never saw it. he should just delete his account crawl in a hole and never come out.

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    Zombie System
    Fantasy · Ahmed_reader
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  • Joey_Allison
    Joey_Allison3yr
    Commented

    can you add faster please

    Ch 54 The Grand Escape (Part-2)
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    A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world
    Sci-fi · SagelyDaoist
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