Review Detail of Joey_Allison in Leveling System In Another World

the author told me to come check this out from the novel because he rewrote it, but I can't just can't I dislike how he describe the rewrite and I read a little bit and hated it. he took everything good and trashed it and multiplied the bad by 99999999. he also tried that new writer trick. which in my opinion is no excuse. there are hundreds of books pick that has a similar setting read it see how they wrote and start from that. I'm not ask you to copy them just get inspiration from it.