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H3LL0_W0RLD

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I'm new to writing so please tell me how I can do better.

2020-07-26 JoinedGlobal
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Commented

    Why does the author know this? Do they have something they want to tell us?

    "Mm-!" What else could he say; it was good. And thank goodness, the bacon tasted nothing like human meat. Human meat tasted a bit more flavorful, with less crunch to it.
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    The Impurity's Ascension
    Urban · Tiphereth
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Commented

    Rumo!? Is that you?

    "That's a Wolpertinger." Scarlett casually introduced, "Don't worry. Whatever you saw, they are harmless as long as you don't search for trouble."
    altalt
    I Didn't Choose the Gangsta System, the Gangsta System Chose Me
    Fantasy · JhiThan_Ser
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Commented

    Why do they always make their voices deeper? That's too cliché! They should try for a higher pitch instead!

    Ch 71 Qin Yi Shopping For Clothes
    altalt
    I Can Extract Everything
    Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Replied to Young_fruit_Smiley

    One of the stories that got picked was 2.35 stars, this one is 3.79 stars. This isn't a very valid point with that in mind.

    altalt
    Planet Builder
    Sci-fi · Fire Hole
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Replied to DaoisthPvB6R

    Building something on the scale of a planet isn't astronomy, it just isn’t. Also mining away an entire planet and bringing its materials to the sun would require quite a lot of resources as well. This is also completely disregarding the energy requirement for any of this. At this point in time, mining has a theoretical minimum of 53 Terawatt hours per year, this is just a minuscule amount of mining compared to mining an entire planet away. Only the first half-mile of the Earth's 30 mile thick crust has been mined so far, in thousands of years. It would take so long and so much energy to just mine a planet away that it really isn't worth it for a dyson sphere that we don't need. It would likely take hundreds of trillions of Terawatt hours to just mine away enough material to build the sphere, much less to transport the material or even build the sphere itself. Then we have to look into building the transports. Oh wow, that’s even more material to mine and more energy to waste! All in all, building a dyson sphere is a poor idea because it takes too much energy, resources, and it would probably take billions of years to even gather all the energy required to mine the resources for it (this is including the growth of our ability to generate energy).

    altalt
    Planet Builder
    Sci-fi · Fire Hole
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Replied to LordJ

    The sun still needs to provide light and energy for the rest of the solar system too, not just the earth.

    altalt
    Planet Builder
    Sci-fi · Fire Hole
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Replied to UnknownHydra

    I think that the point he's trying to make is that it's not that it isn't possible to build a complete dyson sphere around the sun. But that doing such a thing would be stupid and illogical as not only do we not have a use for the excess energy even if we do survive the construction of this massive project, but we also wouldn't have the resources to even build it without destroying the solar system.

    altalt
    Planet Builder
    Sci-fi · Fire Hole
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Commented

    Pretty stylish if I do say so myself.

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    altalt
    Reject Humanity, Return to Monke
    Fantasy · IAmGuavaFruit
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Replied to NEAPOLITAN

    I think it’s somewhat of a meme or a saying. I have seen the phrase appear in a few other novels.

    Women Would Only Affect My Hand Speed!
    altalt
    Practicing Basic Sorcery for Billions of Times Made Me Invincible
    Fantasy · Abundance Every Year
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Commented

    pog

    Ch 3 Unwilling to Cooperate
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    Hero's Carnage
    Urban · MyLittleBrother
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Commented

    but did he ever relieve himself though?

    Ch 98 An Omen of Luck
    altalt
    The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !
    Fantasy · Zombie
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Replied to 999999999999999988

    Ooga

    Ch 90 Meeting An Old Friend
    altalt
    The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !
    Fantasy · Zombie
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Commented

    My favorite recipe, my grandmother always made it for me when I was being bullied. I do wonder where all those bullies went.

    "Ha! Simple. I'll just bring out that special pie recipe again. 😉"
    altalt
    The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !
    Fantasy · Zombie
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Commented

    Just like bees don't conform to the known laws of aviation. It's confirmed, the MC is a bee.

    He doesn't conform to any known laws of the world. Not the ones I'm aware of in any case.
    altalt
    The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !
    Fantasy · Zombie
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Commented

    are you feeling unhappy about webnovel's emote rules, perhaps?

    2) Create a dummy universe and try various settings to test its reaction. Let it destroy it if angered.
    altalt
    The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !
    Fantasy · Zombie
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Commented

    Why does this man have enough wine for two gulps if 1 drop is supposedly enough to kill the MC? I would stay away from any water fountains this man goes to.

    *GULP* *GULP*
    altalt
    The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !
    Fantasy · Zombie
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  • H3LL0_W0RLD
    H3LL0_W0RLD2yr
    Commented

    totally not because of how weak you are, no that couldn't be the case at all...

    When I get to my room Luna is waiting for me. She seems shocked beyond belief when she sees the necklace in my hand. Haha. Apparently, she can't believe that he actually gave it to me, and she can't believe that I could steal it either. Well the second is a given with my noble character.
    altalt
    The Unnamed God. I'm really Not a God You Guys !
    Fantasy · Zombie
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