Review Detail of Ephraim_Williams in Astrid - The Hybrid Princess

I am four chapters in, and here is my first impression. the writing quality definitely needs some help. The author would do well to research how point of view shifts happen naturally instead of labeling it. also try to get a couple editors. the story is being well-developed, following a similar plot of many other stories. there's a decent amount of background and character design in the first four chapters that allow us to get a good picture of things that are going around. Not the greatest, but definitely good for an ******* writer.