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Brian_Cevallos1mthCommentedAfter finishing transferring the technique to Maira, Luan went to Catharina. He said with a sigh, "Catharina, the technique that I will pass on to you is strong, but not the most powerful. Unfortunately, it is the only technique I have that can be of help with your Origin. It is a Fourth Order technique. After completing it, you can learn a new technique. The name of the technique is called: < Star Cloak>. You will be able to create a star mantle with which to attack and defend. This can even be used to ignore gravity and fly. It is a very useful technique and it can be made even better by you as you have the Fabric Star Origin. In any case, I will pass on the first two parts of the technique."- Brian_Cevallos1mthCommented
just .... no
"Luan, do you already know who you want to recruit?" Eating parmigiana filet mignon, Elias asked as soon as he finished chewing. - Brian_Cevallos1mthPosted
Writing this and im not even through chapter 62 but so far very interesting plot line and build up. Random encounters happen early with short build up. Story and conversations play out like a script rather then a novel but its understandable/legible. The world itself and side characters could use a bit more intro build up but its still the early stages. As long as the main character and plot isnt rushed too much it is looking like a great potential. Writing mistakes and grammar could use some review edit before posting but not as bad as many othrr novels out there.
- Brian_Cevallos1mthCommentedIn her heart, she thought someone like John, an utter scoundrel, truly deserved to be scorned by thousands!
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shadow sovereign is that you?
Feeling familiar psychic fluctuations from the Crystal Skeleton Dragon, Bai Qi finally believed that this dragon, bearing a striking resemblance to the Skeleton Giant Dragon, was indeed Alpha. Moreover, the long, snake-like black aura that coiled around the Crystal Skeleton Dragon was actually the shadow of Orochi formed by the Power of Death. - Brian_Cevallos3mthCommented
man, how much longer till you increase this, like everything else just keeps flying! .... well except for the other "normal" laws
[Bloodline(s): Vampyre Progenitor] - Brian_Cevallos3mthCommented
if his two split origins are conaidered seperate entities by the universe laws couldnt he make himself a side character there by noah applying to alexander and vice versa.... making himself more rediculous
[Chosen Extras] :: As with any Protagonist, there must be side characters that add something to your journey. They cannot all be left behind and forgotten like weaklings that contribute nothing. This ability allows you to currently choose 5 Extras who will be granted the [Enhanced Growth Perk] that allows them to progress through Realms at a speed comparable to the Protagonist, +100% Increased Loot Effect when defeating enemies, +100% Increase to their Comprehension, and a Thrice increase to their Luck. - Brian_Cevallos4mthCommented
she really should be taught the water law and fate law, for sure her skill would match well with fate
The Queen in question was staring out absentmindedly as never in her wildest dreams would she have expected the unique skill her mother passed down, {Golden Rule}- would have ever made something like this possible. - Brian_Cevallos4mthCommented
thats just a bit bigger then pluto and pluto is no longer a planet ... canada is bigger as a country then this landmass is a small world...
A mystically floating landmass was amazingly stationed in the void of space, its size nearing that of Small Worlds. - Brian_Cevallos4mthCommented
lol essence
The gorgeously shining pills floated happily in front of him as the transparent cauldron disappeared back into the tattoo on his hand. Noah had an amazed expression as he grabbed one of them and popped them in his mouth. - Brian_Cevallos5mthCommented
love the story plot, the characters and the build up, you keep me wanting more and every time its a new month you captivate me wanting more privilege chapters just try to know more about whats gonna happen next.
However, I'm wondering if everyone agrees with me. Do you like where the story is going, or do you think it's rather boring to have these 'slow' chapters without much action? Please share your view of the last few chapters with me. :D - Brian_Cevallos5mthCommented
hooolllldddd up. youre microwaving a fish and for twenty minutes!!!????
He took a Black Fish from the fridge which he had bought earlier. Little Spider wielded a kitchen knife and quickly descaled the fish and removed the internal organs. He then came to cut and marinate the fish, sprinkling a heap of seasoning before placing it in the microwave for twenty minutes. - Brian_Cevallos5mthCommentedThere were even magic potions made from the bodies of Three-eyed Hill Ghosts full of reproductive organs. After taking them, one can regenerate virility and transform into a spray warrior, smearing everyone's face on sight.
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so like instead of the myth when stung by a jelly fish you pee on the wound now the jelly fish gonna pee on you to make you better....
Diana Moon's Pet Beast was a Healing Jellyfish, a blue creature wrapped in a water stream. Its racial skill, Hydro Healing, was capable of releasing healing water streams to treat teammates' wounds. - Brian_Cevallos5mthCommented
pfffttt
'The Lord hates staying inside the office…why is he suddenly so focused on the office and studying?' The assistant wondered, finally realizing that their Lord was not only powerful, and kind, but that he was also learning from his past mistakes. - Brian_Cevallos6mthCommentedCh 157 Chapter 83: 【Spirituality - Extreme Evil】! Civilizational Foundation! Skeleton World - Spirit Realm Descends! [Ten Thousand Words Essence]_6
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and what about his army of 10000 blood elves!?
No, he could easily destroy that army. Besides, he also had Saraya, Tsuraguki, Selvih and the Anacotha lurking in the sky. - Brian_Cevallos7mthCommented"Invisibility Cloak?" Jack questioned with raised eyebrows. "What would you want with that? Planning some clandestine mischief, are you?"
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someone been reading too much shakespeare.....
She would be his confidante, his support, his ally, and even his woman as they navigated the challenges ahead. - Brian_Cevallos7mthCommented
henh? but he is lvl 18? like literally its whats posted up there in your char status....
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