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Stoicist13dReplied to Victor_7740Yes!!
Looking at the mountains's on the map, Henry remembered about the terror of the Roman Empire, Hannibal Barca, the single strategist who achieved a feat deemed as impossible, crossing the Alps and threatening Rome in its own domain. Hannibal was a Carthaginian general and military genius who lived during the Second Punic War, born in 247 BC.- Stoicist19dReplied to Dumb_organism
haha! Sorry about that, I will fix it asap! Oh my god, it was also supposed to be "shut"
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Yeah, that might be possible, but this will require quite a good mage
Even in modern society, life was difficult for people with disabilities, but in this world, the challenges were even greater. Here, the law of the jungle reigned supreme, and someone without their limbs would face dire consequences without a doubt. - Stoicist1mthReplied to Dumb_organism
At least in this part of the North.
Upon hearing this, Henry gave a big smile - "Sure, I wasn't expecting anything more"- he said and immediately stretched his hands, as if he was afraid of her backing down on the agreement. - Stoicist1mthReplied to
Exactly!
Upon hearing this, Henry gave a big smile - "Sure, I wasn't expecting anything more"- he said and immediately stretched his hands, as if he was afraid of her backing down on the agreement. - Stoicist1mthReplied to Dumb_organism
Now, it’s corrected haha! I have missed on fixing this one! Thank you!
"The enemies are camping on the base of the mountain. There are at least a thousand of them." – She said, between deep breaths, a lot calmer than before – "There are five Fourth Stage Warriors on their ranks, and around twenty Third Stage and Sixty Second Stage." - Stoicist1mthReplied to Dumb_organismCh 151 The banquet
- Stoicist1mthReplied to Dumb_organismCh 151 The banquet
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Thank you for pointing that out! I got basically no editor and its only me doing the proofread. Some repeated paragraphs go unnoticed in the writing process. Sorry about that and thank you for the comprehension!
Viscount Jasper's hasty departure from the capital marked the beginning of a series of events that unfolded before Leier's very eyes. She witnessed the tumultuous moments as they unfolded, etching them into her memory. She stood witness as the king ascended the walls, delivering a resounding speech that rallied the army to a resounding victory against the barbarian invaders. In that moment, Leier felt the surge of pride and hope in her heart. - Stoicist1mthReplied to Volkov
Yooo! So, Luna has much more bargaining power than Henry. Imagine if you are the single one in a whole country capable of utilizing magic. It’s you who set the price for teaching anyone.
Upon hearing this, Henry gave a big smile - "Sure, I wasn't expecting anything more"- he said and immediately stretched his hands, as if he was afraid of her backing down on the agreement. - Stoicist1mthReplied to Volkov
His eyes are grey, but it turns purple when his emotions flutuates.
A few hours passed before Henry slowly opened his eyes. The once-grey hue in his irises now had a darker tint, almost shifting toward a shade of purple. It was as if a living flame flickered deep within his gaze. - Stoicist1mthReplied to zoka_kola
Yeah, thinking back about it, it seems like I have made a hole in the plot. I am just re-reading it with more care and it seems like I will have to pull the strings and make for it. I will try revisit some chapters and revise it. Really thank you!
On the next day, accompanied by a troop of about twenty cavalry, fifty infantry and two scribes, Henry mounted on his horse and treaded on the White Merchant Road, his first destination being the Eastern side of the kingdom. - Stoicist1mthReplied to zoka_kola
Oh, I didn't make it clear in this paragraph. He is using his teeth to hold and let go of the arrow.
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So, Henry needs to have everything under control and he can't raise generals and leaders away from his watch. He wants to control the knowledge and the people.
Leier took a brief glance at her king, noticing that he was looking ahead and returned her eyes to the road - "Your majesty have provided opportunities for the people to rise in by establishing the Commander's Training Center. The Royal Library has allowed them to gain knowledge, while the schools you established, staffed with royal teachers, have given the people a chance to change" - she replied with pride evident in her face, turning to face Henry - "Indeed, your rule have completely changed the lives of those under your rule." - Stoicist1mthReplied to zoka_kola
Even in a nation-state there is a necessity for hierarchy. Stahl is going towards a society based and founded on the king's image, with the army only under the king's hands.
"Answer me," Henry demanded, his voice low, betraying a hint of frustration. He understood the necessity of maintaining discipline among his troops; hierarchy and rules were paramount. - Stoicist1mthReplied to zoka_kolaCh 130 The end of a battle
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As you know, almost all leaders had gone through the teaching of Henry, who imbued them with a lot of ideas and knowledge. The engineers and builders didn't go through such training, it's still on the way. It's like in the ancient roman empire, where the generals gave orders and designs and the builders had to accomplish the mission.
Ch 132 The East and West - I