Review Detail of Just_another_guy in Una Bruja Escarlata Diferente (MCU AU)
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It is a Chinese novel with slight changes. Within what MTL can offer is the typical invincible system flow. I don't appreciate that you haven't said it expressly and given at least the original name. I know that writing is difficult but you don't have to be too opportunistic. Regarding the modifications, the elimination of constant cultural references is appreciated, I hate it when inappropriate comments break the sense of substitution, the fewer references to a previous life the better. For your part, the subtle changes in Wanda from being a former Chinese worker to a former Venezuelan teenage girl barely affect her subsequent actions in general. Therefore in both cases they are superfluous.
Una Bruja Escarlata Diferente (MCU AU)
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Thank you for your review and opinion. In the synopsis I expressed that it is my version of a novel here on Webnovel and that I suspected it was a Chinese novel. The thing is that I was too lazy to look for the original since within the little that I have written and have not published, I changed a lot of the plot. And as I said in the synopsis, the most notable change is that the protagonist is a woman in her past life. In the original novel he was a middle-aged man who was reincarnated as Wanda. Plus he seems to suffer from misandry. By giving as an example that the mere fact of touching a man's hand made the author write that it disgusted and repulsed him. Very crazy things xD