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King_Kitkat5dCommentedonce in a while, but make them separate chapters that can be skipped and won't affect the story.
R18 yes or no:- King_Kitkat11dCommented
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I'm open to suggestions but the initial idea is Alicia Clark - King_Kitkat1mthCommented
I just started and I love the story so far but the chapter format is killing me, his status screen doesn't need to be in ever chapter, unless Adam us looking at we don't need it. it breaks the flow of the story and feels like a slog, I go from being drawn into having to skip a paragraph of text because it's redundant. passing is a little fast only because you do so many scene changes and time skips.
Ch 8 "Abracadabra, bitch!" (chapter 8) - King_Kitkat1mthCommentedCh 14 School
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ohhh, okay then, Dante, Excalibur, limbo,sevagoth,ash. those are the best frames I could think of that are strong would fit the MC's personality and wouldn't break the mcu or Marvel universe. what about weapons 🤔 and companions.
BUT it's kinda hard to think of one for me mostly because there just so much and a lot of frames are capable of breaking the MCU balance take the spore frame nidus I kinda like him but hes ability's are kinda not eco friendly so he's off but that's not just it. - King_Kitkat1mthCommented
Dante or oberon Prime, in my opinion, they are the current strongest and coolest looking, especially since when properly customized/modded either way plz no female frame and only primes (they are just better looking and stronger)
So I have been grinding warframe trying to get the new frame but it's takeing to long so I just kinda gave up a little so I am sorry anyway I was thinking about what warframe is ganna be the MC main. - King_Kitkat2mthCommented
not me personal pick, but we'll see were this leads.
"I hella have won give up and become my servant." - King_Kitkat2mthCommented
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STORM A.K.A IDK - King_Kitkat2mthReplied to THICCNESSMATERS
you are doing a lords work thank you
[Ding! Warning! SCP-1281 has appeared!] - King_Kitkat2mthReplied to Xilver
no bc it didn't say a different spider(silk already shoulve had powers). it's probably an oc or someone that makes sense to have spider power like Black Widow.
[In response Peter Parker's fate has now been changed as his destiny weaves with another +1000 Points] - King_Kitkat2mthCommented
I love the story so far but I have one suggestion, with stories like this the Mc does whatever to get power and the system becomes useless have him stuck with technology and if he does get power have them be directly related to technology. another this is the "perfect Mc" maksle. Sure, he makes mistakes, has some experiments, and gets loose his technology falls into the wrong hands, etc.... this makes the world different from Marvel and other fanfics while also giving you room to create new heroes and villains(or changing already created ones) Nad it makes the Mc more relatable.
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yes, no member of the pack shall be left behind. 3 power stones for you
Ryan just shook his big head and allowed her to follow, obviously when they connected in a pack way she had been enhanced some, he didnt know the extent of it but if she was confident he wouldn't stop her. Though he was shocked next as her grey fur turned black and she grew five feet taller making her about six foot, her shining yellow eyes glowing brightly in the dark forest. - King_Kitkat2mthCommented
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°Sub Plot - King_Kitkat2mthCommented
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°Romance - King_Kitkat2mthCommentedCh 18 Chapter 17): Light'em Up!!!