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YumeDream

YumeDream

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I'm not perfect, but still i try my best, although i am super lazy. The pain doesn't bother me, but the sad emotions it does, that's why you have to put all your effort in what you do, even breath.

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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream1d
    Replied to LukeMorningStar

    milk no naruto hehe

    "Kakashi won't come until afternoon. Right now, he should be investigating Naruto's room with the third Hokage," Sasuke thought. "Well, time to make things work here."
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    Naruto - My World Domination System
    Anime & Comics · WritingMachineG
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream12d
    Replied to Galfo

    yep

    Eliminate all the impossible, then the remaining possibility, no matter how impossible it seems, is the only and correct answer!
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    One Piece: Almost Exposed That I Am Stronger Than Roger
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream13d
    Commented

    great chapter, minato is invincible as always and how it should be

    Ch 6 Time Skip
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    Namikaze Minato (Self Insert)
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream18d
    Replied to Deku_Hero_5330

    naruto had tried this too, but in the end, it ended up being the same thing. One the shadow clones disappeared, all the natural energy flown to Naruto, almost making him a toad

    Even though he could feel that he could absorb the natural energy, Kazutora didn't dare to. After all, he knew that absorbing too much natural energy would make him turn to stone, and even if he had Natural Sage Body, Kazutora didn't gamble on the perk.
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    Naruto: Different Perks
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream18d
    Commented
    He formed the seals, and a burst of smoke appeared around him. Looking at the blond beauty in front of him, Kazutora was surprised, and he looked at the bountiful chest in the mirror.
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    Naruto: Different Perks
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream21d
    Commented

    I tend to like long chapters, but this one was a little monotonous. I just want to share my thoughts with the author so they can fix it.

    Ch 1 THIS IS FOR WORD COUNTING SKIP THIS
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    NARUTO WITH TOBIRAMA TEMPLATE
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream21d
    Replied to Indra_

    how much is that in cm?

    Out of the hokage building right under the hokage mountain stepped out a figure around 170 cm tall with a sword fixed on his back, his silver hair rustling due to the breeze.
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    Konoha: The Template System
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream24d
    Replied to Lithiel

    saitama strength is infinite, at least he can grow without limit

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    One Piece: One Punch Man
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream24d
    Replied to Goatless_Pillow

    you are Chinese

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    One Piece: One Punch Man
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream1mth
    Commented

    how the heck did they notice his eyes if they were behind

    Then the Juggernaut looked at me and roared and rushed at me "Do you want to dance?" i put the Gunbai on my shoulder then my eyes changed into a Three Tomoe and the Astraea Familia noticed my eyes and was shocked "Then let's dance." i said then rushed at the Juggernaut and dodge it's claws and smashed the Gunbai on it's side. "You will be my punching bag for today so don't go crumbling on me anytime soon." then i vanished from my spot and appeared beside the Juggernaut and roundhouse it on the face cracking it's skull. The Astraea familia was shocked that the Juggernaut that almost killed them now looks like it's about to crumble with just a few hits.
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    Traveling in the Animeverse As Madara
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream1mth
    Commented

    Minato has indeed improved Hiraishin, being the Hiraishin barrier one of this. After all, he is seen using one of his Kunai as medium to stop the bijudama at a considerable distance to later send it to a far distance, all without blinking. so, besides that, we could infere that if tobirama hadn't improved it to that point, then Minato indeed made the technique more versatile and potentially greatly efficient. After all, he had continued to develop the technique with the help of the Uzumaki legendary fuinjutsu.

    I want to hear your thoughts on it to avoid any possible plot hole.
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    Konoha: The Template System
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream1mth
    Commented

    sounds about right

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Naruto: Fourth Hokage
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream1mth
    Replied to HolyMantle

    I'm a fan of your profile

    The most prominent structure is a massive stone statue standing atop the high walls of Demacia—a giant figure with wings spread wide, covering the sky, known as the Guardian of Demacia, Galio.
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    Arcane: Champion Witness System
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream1mth
    Commented

    I don't feel like they are blaming him specifically, but whatever, let's just read.

    //// God I hate translating this chapter, blaming Heimerdinger for all this? Wat the author thinking..... Well at least the chinese community agrees with me lol. ////
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    Arcane: Champion Witness System
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream1mth
    Commented

    I have to be honest with you, the only problem I can see, like mayor problem right now, is only the souls merging kinda weird thing. besides that, everything else is pretty much fine. If you feel something is wrong, u can just complement it with other things. you don't need to do something fancy. Just stick to simple drafts, and from there, let it flow

    Ch 28 Update/What Happened *o* le gasp
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    Roses Multiverse Power Unlocking System
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream1mth
    Replied to Baldysalino

    is mystical

    "Why did it taste like that?" Hisako was surprised that Erina's beef burger tasted like toast.
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    Food Wars: Tavern
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream1mth
    Replied to Chaos_Order8

    I've seen worse.

    He sat down and gathered consciousness quietly. A few minutes later, he got out of bed. He washes him face and makes breakfast very quickly. After breakfast finished, he packed his school bag and put on his school uniform. He took the door key then locked it and went out.
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    Dragon of the Root
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream1mth
    Commented

    hehe

    Ch 535 Kirisu Mafuyu is very talented at cooking
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    People with Superpowers Don’t Want to Be Popular
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream1mth
    Commented

    himself? hehe

    Ch 28 Ryumyaku
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    Naruto: Gojo Satoru Is The Strongest
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  • YumeDream
    YumeDream1mth
    Replied to Malphegor

    eran is a Spanish word. In this case, they were genin, not chuninn

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    The Great Swordsman Of The Shinobi World
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