honestly love the book so far, my only complaint is that your chapters are way too short. keep up the good work though writings hard this story is quite unique, and I like that.

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this is the Assassins Apprentice written by Robin Hobb but with some names changed and paragraphs added or subtracted here and there with the added cultivation theme stuff that doesn't quite fit with the typical cultivation story's because it's plagiarized from another author. but if you like this try the actual book you can buy is off amazon

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its so obviously bahlsen that i hope it isnt

cant believe your actually asking for donations your writing is barely legible. do you even proof read what you write there are errors in almost every sentence your characters sound like cave men.

needs hard core editing can't even start to read it got to chapter 5 the concepts seem interest but there are grammer errors in almost every sentence

don't know if you'll see this but i believe someone has posted this book series on amazon but called it lords of chaos by zara atkins obviously you wrote it so just a heads up and hey fantastic book you should really continue your writing its top notch

the one thing I absolutely hate about this series other than the cost for chapters ...... freakin "pro-league" uhg just tell us how many chapters we need to skip

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