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I don't understand what you want to convey. I'm just telling you the parts I don't like and the parts I like. I couldn't bear to read this couple and didn't dare read any more. And I hope that when you unpair someone Someone will let us know. (English is not my first language)(If I made you angry or uncomfortable, I apologize for my mistake)😖🙏
If izuku stops pairing his mother with all might please inform me, I hate this kind of pairing. I'd rather her choose for herself. Receiving advice or planning from someone I feel bad for you. From what I've read, Inko has feelings for her child. It might seem bad, bad, and depraved in the eyes of others. But the important point is that she made the choice without anyone's advice or planning. But what she got in return was that the man she loved conspired to give her to another man. It's what I'm most angry about. Like a parent trying to get their daughter to marry the person of their choice because they think it's good for her, but the rest of the novel I really liked. The characters look lively. Very exciting 18+ scenes And the protagonist's abilities are quite creative.
You guys think too easily about sirzech. His powers are not weak and the main character doesn't even have the ability to fight against the power of destruction, so don't let your real-life pathos ruin the novel. The system doesn't necessarily mean you're the strongest. Don't be too arrogant.
I like your character designs. Everyone has their own emotions and thoughts. And women don't just live between men's legs. Your novel is very bitter. But how can we know the value of sweetness if we have never been bitter before? I have only one complaint: the name of the show, it's silly. It gave me a taste of faloo. And lastly, I really like the teacher's role. She's good in bed. I hope the MC can't compete with her in this matter. Haha.
I don't want you to write about Almighty God because He has Omniscience, Omnipotence, Omnipresence. Just the thought of your enemy having one of these three things gives me a headache. I can give you an example of one power: Omnipresence. This omnipresence is very scary. Because it means He is in rock, dirt, sand, air, your blood, your cells, your soul. your thoughts If further above He exists in the past, the future, or even infinite parallel worlds. Just one power is enough for us to see the horrors. (Some people know these powers but cannot describe their meaning. When I read it, it makes me feel stupid. and despaired that he did not know the horrors of these powers.)