amy_raines
A stay-at-home mom, daughter, and wife. Growing up, there wasn't much to do, so I spent all my time studying everything I could. Now, I create my own worlds full of uncharted places and unreal events.
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I'm not a huge fan of romance stories. However, this one is very interesting. There are very few to no mistakes, the plot is entertaining, and the characters are understandable. I will definitely keep reading and looking for more chapters as they come out.
Way to go. I generally do not like romance stories of any kind. However, this one has my attention. I absolutely love it.
Typically, I do not read romance stories. However, this author has really grabbed my attention with this story. (No Spoilers) If you like the fun banter that goes on between siblings and friends, and a romance story that steps out of the ordinary- I highly recommend this story! I am officially hooked!
I think your word processor failed you in the third line where there are two question mark diamonds. I'm enjoying the story so far, btw. Great character development, I love the banter. It's already fun and interesting!
Hi, this story contains a lot of good elements. However, there are numerous errors and flow problems that makes the story very confusing. I will not go into detail here. I will only point out that the characters, plot, development, grammar, and spelling need serious attention before moving forward with any more chapters. A good proofread and edit would serve this story well.