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Yeah they should put a HUGE DISCLAIMER stating that the novel will more than likely get dropped like the last 2 novels he started and almost never updates anymore so read at your own cost that way people won't waste there money on an author who doesn't know how to complete his work without being warned before hand. Then those people won't be here to complain in as large of numbers when he starts his 4th book! and if they do show his loyal bootlickers can just say "nah get out of here you were warned before hand" . Problem solved
A bit diff from other novels iv read so far, and iv rather enjoyed it up to the privilege chapters where I stopped. Honestly I do feel that he does contradict himself a few times in the story but nothing major. I like how it's a world where everyone tries to build you up and not tear you down and I quit like the personalitys in the book whether it's people or soul pets. Only other thing I can really think of if sometimes after explaining something in the book he might repeat the same explanation 2-3 times throughout the next few chapters and i start skimming till the explanation is done again. all in all I really hope the authour continues this story as I would really enjoy seeing where this novel leads with the soul pets! Now I'm not an expert critiquer this just how I felt when reading the story!
How come some of these chapters are written really good and others are like bland short descriptive lifeless chapters??? what's goin on here?? am I the only one that feels this way? Cause this is a recent thing that just started happening imo and it's a shame to ruin such a good story by not taking your time with it!
umm what was up with that chapter it just kinda jumped from thing to thing no transition everything was short and like lifeless and scattered. it 100% felt like a diff person wrote that chapter. I think the word I'm looking for would be "deadpan"? maybe??
let's do the math here let assume each chapter cost min 10 coins...... 450x10=4500....... huh look at coin store $20.00 for 1100 coins....huh wierd that means I spent almost $100 on your novel....that's enough to buy 2-5book depending on what u read or buy.....and your telling me that the novel i enjoy reading is getting put on the back burner????? anybody whose made it this far in deserves the full story by now anyways with what we have invested in this to help you get this far and now it's getting shoved aside? Sorry bro I want the full story and feel like it's owed! I am very upset about this.