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HaileyCelaro_1

HaileyCelaro_1

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2020-06-03 JoinedUnited States
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Replied to Fallency

    Thank you very much. Yes I know it hasn’t gotten updated in a while, I’ve been extremely busy but I will try to update it soon. I’m very glad that you liked it [img=recommend]

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    DesperateMeasures
    Fantasy · HaileyCelaro_1
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Posted

    The author did a great job. There were a few places where I felt that the writing could've been better, but overall, the story was written wonderfully. I feel like you might've made the MC a bit too OP but I guess it's fine. I love where I see the story headed. Keep up the good work [img=recommend]

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    The Apathetic Battlemaniac
    Fantasy · FREAKKETTONE
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Posted

    I was immediately drawn in by this story. It's incredibly interesting and entertaining. The author did a great job with the world that they created. Keep up the good work. [img=recommend]

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    Shattered World: Shadows of Ilrathia
    Games · Devilstorm
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Replied to Devilstorm

    Thank you very much for the positive thoughts. I’m so glad that you enjoyed it and I hope that you will continue to enjoy the story as it goes on.

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    DesperateMeasures
    Fantasy · HaileyCelaro_1
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Replied to Maryam_Mayo

    She’s not like other girls 🤪

    "אני לא מדמם"
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    Survive as long as you can!!
    Horror · Maryam_Mayo
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Replied to Maryam_Mayo

    I meant you as in the character but I feel like you should also be scared.

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    Survive as long as you can!!
    Horror · Maryam_Mayo
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Replied to Heartless_Qi_2

    Thank you so much, I‘m glad that you enjoyed it. I’ll try to get the next chapter out as soon as possible.

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    DesperateMeasures
    Fantasy · HaileyCelaro_1
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Replied to MisterEnd

    Thank you very much, I‘m so glad that you enjoyed it and yeah I’m not so great at writing a synopsis 😅

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    DesperateMeasures
    Fantasy · HaileyCelaro_1
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Posted

    Wow, that was insane. I might have trouble sleeping for a few days. The author needs to work on their grammar and spelling but the story was very scary. I loved it. keep up the good work.

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    Survive as long as you can!!
    Horror · Maryam_Mayo
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Commented

    Wake*

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    Survive as long as you can!!
    Horror · Maryam_Mayo
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Commented

    Oh, fun, the language of my people. Why is Hebrew in this, isn't it usually Latin or smth like that?

    "אני לא מדמם"
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    Survive as long as you can!!
    Horror · Maryam_Mayo
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Commented

    There's witchery now? Okay, I love it.

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    Survive as long as you can!!
    Horror · Maryam_Mayo
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Commented

    Bruh what? Oh okay, so this kid's just stupid. Good to know.

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    Survive as long as you can!!
    Horror · Maryam_Mayo
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Posted

    Wow. Just wow. I have absolutely no words. The author was incredible with the descriptive writing, I almost felt like I was there. Well done, keep up the good work.

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    Heartless Immortal
    Eastern · Heartless_Qi_
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Commented

    Okay, I'm sorry but who in their right mind would actually play that game? Idc if you're not scared, better safe than sorry, and somehow I have a feeling that you'll be sorry.

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    Survive as long as you can!!
    Horror · Maryam_Mayo
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Commented

    Mama mia, I feel like I was just put through an emotional rollercoaster

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    Heartless Immortal
    Eastern · Heartless_Qi_
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Commented

    Wow, starting off strong😳

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    Heartless Immortal
    Eastern · Heartless_Qi_
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Replied to NB00000

    Yep, starting off strong 😅

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    DesperateMeasures
    Fantasy · HaileyCelaro_1
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Replied to Eclipse_Ranger

    I try my best to give an honest review because as an author, I love when people try to give constructive criticism but reading back that review, I may have seemed a bit harsh. I didn’t mean for it to come out that way. You really did do great 👍

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    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Eclipse_Ranger
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  • HaileyCelaro_1
    HaileyCelaro_11yr
    Posted

    Personally, this isn't my type of story but for someone who is more into this specific type of novel, it would be great. The author is very talented and I hope they keep up the good work. Good job [img=recommend]

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    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantasy · Eclipse_Ranger
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