Crak
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Sociopath that is bored of real life. I like all genras of stories as long as they stick to what they are. Fools with morals are my bane. I'm in search of a partner (a good book, not a person)
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Crak6dCommentedThat sounds more logical than the few Chinese novels I have read
"How the hell can a person survive after burning alive?! How does a plan appear when he jumps off of a building?!! How does the magma turn into ice when he falls into it but remains magma when a villain falls into it?!!! And how in the hell of a mothertucking sanity and all the logic in the entire creation that is sane and sound DOES HE SCREW A GHOST?!!!!!!" Gradually, Wei Jun's each question amassed force behind every word and finally, it erupted at the last question.- Crak6dCommented
This is so refreshing thank you author
The voice began to explain but was interrupted by young Ruan, 'Skip the sales pitch and tell me your functions.' - Crak10dCommented
Story seems interesting but it feels rushed Press - > <- (space) between paragraphs plz
At midnight, now December 15th, Damien was finally skilled enough to hack into the Bank of America and created a bank account for himself. This Checking and Savings account was under his name, social and everything. This account was hacked to make it seem as if he was a legal adult in the system. He also was able to hack into the bank accounts of various drug dealers, human traffickers, and murderers giving himself a starting budget of $10,000. He was even nice enough to gather all the evidence needed to arrest those same criminals while giving the credit to good cops that don't take bribes and bend the law. These 18 criminals that Damien helped put away, and took a negligible amount of money from, helped make the career of 25 cops in New York City. While his way of contacting these officers involved hacking electronic devices they were using while alone and only giving them the info needed and a name to refer to. The name he told them was "Upgrade". Followed by a black and green circular symbol with two inverted triangles vertically centered inside. ( think omnitrix symbol) Using his knowledge of the Marvel world, it was easy for Damien to remember the names of a lot of crooks that were captured easily or had no effect on the storyline. While at the same time he knew of a few truly heroic cops in New York city as well. Which is how the name "Upgrade'' spread after reporting to their superiors how they got their info. - Crak10dCommented
This was definitely written by a German person, no way anyone else is capable of stringing together all these words without breathing because that would be so unlikely to be anyone remotely close to the Deutschland so as to... -I can do this all day
Knowing that in the marvel world there are a lot of people with abilities that can affect the memories, and read the thoughts and mind of others; he wanted to prepare himself against that. Plus having that as a way of organizing his memories and further improving his mind was a great bonus. It took him two weeks alone to be able to even reach his mindscape through meditation alone. Further modifying his mindscape and building up defences took months. He surrounded his mindscape with multiple barriers and firewalls that allow him to filter access. Of the 5 barriers and firewalls, the closer to the center of his mindscape the more advanced the firewalls and their screening abilities and the more powerful the corresponding barrier. The outer level he left blank and made into a communication zone for him and any future psychic friends. This zone allowed him to be able to communicate and share thoughts without it leaking his inner thoughts and interfering with his thought process. But still needed his permission to be able to bypass the firewalls, unless powerful enough to overpower his weakest defenses. The second level was for his surface thoughts and would be a good bluff for those who think they broke his defenses. The constructs of his mindscape begin here. Appearing to be a massive compound. This zone also stores copies of general and public information that he gathered in research that normal people would know. Also many false memories and maze-like inner structure with automated defenses, drones, and security scanning at irregular intervals. The third level is hidden in the inner part of the compound. Needing verification and access through a firewall to get through. Holding his inner thoughts and more copies of all info he researched and learned. Still all things regarded as his secrets are hidden deeper. In the fourth level hidden are the hidden memories, thoughts, and memories about his powers. All the things he learned to use them better and even the schematics of all devices he scanned. This may seem like the final level but everything in this level is also a copy. Behind a hidden bookcase in this library of info is a hidden server room where all the original copies are stored and this is the core of his mindscape. Filled with servers and 5 different computers. All looking like an upgrade of the previous one. And each has access to some information. Hidden on a seemingly worn out computer, which in all actuality is the most advanced of them all, but seemed to be less advanced and glitchy than the others is a secret file hidden in the operating system of the computer itself. This file was actually the true and complete library of everything Damien. His past life included. While others would only be able to see folders and files about his early childhood until 6 years old. This hidden file though was set to replace any and all corrupted information and memories placed or found in his mind after a thorough scan every 12 hrs. - Crak13dCommented
I never really understood this trope, if the truck runs over the person then 1 person dies, if you jump in front 1 person dies Thus why jump in front?
He drops his bookbag and begins to sprint across the street to push the woman out of the way of the speeding car. Just as he was sure she was in the clear he noticed how close the car is to hitting him so he jumped as hard as he could. After barely getting past the car he lost his adrenaline rush and his exhaustion hit him all at once. Losing all strength, Damien stumbled and fell forward on the curb and fell head first. Hitting his head on the curb, Damien opened a huge gash on his head and cracked his skull. The young woman who was just saved looked over to her savior to thank him, but instead saw him in a puddle of blood. Seeing the huge puddle of blood the woman screamed, causing a huge commotion. - Crak13dCommented
Fix the cringe, keep the crazy
'This really means the world to her,' Don thought, realizing that his initial idea to simply say he was no longer interested in conquering the world wouldn't work. 'I can't imagine a girl going this far for a guy in the real world. Maybe they're out there, but I sure as hell didn't meet them. I mean, she's a little crazy and obsessive, but… I think I can fix her,' Don convinced himself before clearing his throat. - Crak13dCommented
Life in prison for stealing pastries?
**Crime:** Theft of a sweet roll with malicious intent. - Crak13dCommented**Rolling dice now.**
- Crak21dCommented
Stoopid
Hearing his words, I smiled as well before replying, "I really have nothing to say, but I have one request: just finish this rebirthing as soon as possible, damnit." - Crak21dCommented
Oh I expected a selfie Pic from our dear author, unless author really looks like this?
[[Character Illustration]] - Crak25dCommented
How ironic
"No, you could be a fake–disguising as my Sister, give me her name now," - Crak26dCommentedI was already human, so there was no use lamenting over that.
- Crak28dCommented
What's this Pokémon!? It's a!... Dense and naive main character!
Chapter No.3 Wild Protagonist Spotted - Crak28dCommented
He's too pathetic
"I-I'm sorry. Actually..." - Crak29dCommented
So instead of the Medusa head the aegis shield is made from a yeti, alright
While Midnight Aegis(same weapon name) was an event boss, the real star of the event was the raid boss, the magical beast "Yeti." Consequently, the strength wasn't that impressive. Additionally, the rarity of the obtainable weapon cards was somewhat lackluster, so I collected it but never used it. - Crak29dCommented
I can see a scythe being nature attribute since it's originally a farming tool but light is a little farfetched
The 'Reaper's Scythe,' despite its name, is sadly not a dark attribute but a light attribute weapon. Even if I train myself, this is too much. - Crak29dCommented
I always wonder why the protagonist that knows all the events doesn't claim to be a seer or oracle in order to improve their standing? Is this a dumb idea?
I know everything about "Engage hundred times ." Even if I can't match the protagonist, but still, I should still be able to become reasonably strong. - Crak29dCommented
I have trouble understanding the existence of dungeons in a sci-fi intergalactic setting Furthermore what monster is he talking about? It makes very little sense to me
This dungeon is divided into shallow levels with many monsters and traps, and deeper levels with stronger monsters. While the shallow levels were manageable, the problem arose with the stronger monsters in the deeper levels, where my attacks didn't work effectively. - Crak29dCommented
Murlocks will rise once again! -Gluuguluglu
'Maybe I can make some secret races... just like the Murlocs that became an April Fool's joke in my previous world, maybe I can use the system that WoW implemented in Legion so that players can meet other races in the game and unlock that race for them in an unobtrusive way, like an Easter Egg that players would have to play and gain reputation with the race before they could become one of them.' Alex began to come up with this plan.