ghost=spirit fck GPT

No its not. The Rings of Power in J.R.R. Tolkien's world, particularly the One Ring, make people invisible because they draw the wearer into the shadow world. This shadow world is the domain of spirits and invisible forces. While the wearer's body becomes invisible in the physical world, their spirit is shifted into the shadow world, where they are visible to other spirits and beings. And the body is like in between the real world and the shadow world. The Maia (like sauron or Gandalf) dont get invisible bc they r like ghosts (lesser gods of creation. The elves awoke with there ghost in the real world, so they also dont get invisible. With the dwarfs its unknown, theories say bc they got a strong body from aule and the 'adoption' from Illuvatar...

sure? thought it would be "an" bc the 'O'

I know, but i changed it for my story a little bit:)

Die Filme sind hier leider nicht Buchgetreu. Aragorn wurde erst 2931 des Dritteb Zeitalter geboren. Der Hobbit spielt im Jahr 2941 des Dritten Zeitalter. Zudem wächst Aragorn nach dem Tot seines Vaters in Bruchtal auf und bekommt erst mit ca 20 Jahren, also ca. 2951 sein wahres Erbe von Elrond gesagt. Zuvor wurde er nur Estel von Elrond genannt, was Sindarin für Hoffnung ist. Ich habe mich hier eher an den Büchern als an den Filmen orientiert:)

There will be kingdom building but no romance

Going to bed now. When we hit 300 you'll get double chapter tomorrow:)

Gruß zurück aus Freiburg:)

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Lets get to 300 Powerstones and i will upload the next chapter in advanced for you guys:)

Curiosity ist "Neugier" in German. Neu = new Gier= Greed Worked much better in German than in English...

Nah pls let it be. I want people to talk more about it, i learn from every critic, even when im not on the same page as u. You do you and thats fine, only bc u hv a different opinion doesnt make it less interesting. Also its quit a controverse topic... I imagened the fight more like Saruman against nazghul ghost in the third hobbit

Sry but i dont realy get it... Narzug was literaly stronger in a direct clash in this chapter... he was also faster... Gandalf won bc he had ca 2000 years experience in close combat and used spells in clever combination... MC fights for about 3 years now and one of them he just chilled and smoked pipe in bree.... I dont think MC should be strong enough to fight or even win against Gandalf at the moment.

This is my first story and im totally new to this writing stuff. Hope u like it and if not tell me what i can do better❤️

Thank you for the critic... i thought it would be more unreasonable if MC would hv won this fight. Didnt want to let it sound funny or comedic, thought it would be more like an epic fight which MC lost due to the nature of the enemy... but apparently didnt work that well😅 Gandalf is literally a Maia, one of the lesser 'gods' of creation... In my opinion it was to early to let MC win this fight. Also Gandalf is very apologetic when it comes to the distinctions between good and evil... spares, for example, Gollum... MC is in my opinion just happy he didnt die against a literal god and dont want revenge for now, bc he knows he would die... But nevertheless thank u... will try better in the future:)

Sry from the south, will change it later

No Proplem, was kind of confused not gonna lie

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Thank u for the kind words. I give my best:)