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Grafian4hCommentedCh 115 (Hidden Title)- Grafian1dCommented
Just wait until right before the Earth goes poof and when they're only alive because Feng ferried them over to the Greater World
"Uh, I have no idea how I'm going to explain this to my parents and the rest of my family." With her family's standing and her being a rich princess, there was no way they'd allow their heir to share a man with other women. - Grafian2dCommented
It still feels like a very stupid temporary nerf to inject artificial tension into the story that will never not feel forced
Thankfully, his current attributes were worlds beyond the current players, so there was no threat of them being able to even scratch him despite him only having 20% of his usual attributes; with his Strength and Agility still being in the thousands. - Grafian2dCommented
While in line with canon, it is still a very annoying mindset to keep reading about. It makes the s*x scenes fall somewhat flat when he suddenly becomes 'dominant' when in everything else relationship related he is an impassive, cowardly beta
Thus, after much deliberation, Feng opted to leave it for later to be dealt with and focus on the things he needed to do for now. - Grafian6dCommented
Even if she isn't at the workshop, the top echelon of the guild is and can reach him in real life.
"I was doing doin a quest inside a place with no system connection." Feng briefly explained "Has something happened?" - Grafian6dCommentedCh 80 How Angels Sing R-18
- Grafian9dReplied to ZRain_raion
huh I always thought of chloe too
"Guild Leader *cough*, just leave me behind. Save yourself." The red haired woman with an alluring figure in his arms tried to convince the young man, as she coughed up blood. - Grafian9dCommented
a magic circle is a magic circle... runes, squiggles, geometric shapes... don't think there's anything novel about what she sees
... It was unlike those that were used in the redhead's world- in fact, it was completely different from what the devils in her world used - Grafian11dCommented
Kinda weird to not just stick to one system of classification
I planned to stay in the outer layer of the Sunset Monster Mountain Range as it was inhabited only mostly by Minion Monsters which are the same as Low-Class, Warrior Monsters, same as Middle-Class, and Commander Monster same as High-Class. - Grafian13dCommented
honestly I prefer the more detailed approach your other DxD fics took. Such a long timeskip, while adding a bunch of characters with only a few lines... eh. Still, with how often you've rewritten your old ones, I can get how having to focus on the same arcs again and again can be annoying beyond belief lol. Also, will the focus of this fic lie more on multiversal exploration than the others? Sure near the end they all started ranging out, but you keep running out of steam not long after. Perhaps by speeding through DxD we'll get more of that?
Ch 77 8 Years Later. - Grafian13dCommented
thought you were going to have him just be a demon? You really can't pretend he isn't a good deal werewolf by now :p
He still wore the Cocytus Earing, which was now a much darker purple shade than before. He also had a few new features that he did not have before on his head: a pair of large black Werewolf ears with dark purple tips. Behind him were nine black werewolf tails with purple tips swaying lazily. - Grafian16dCommented
I liked the potential she had in that story, but tbh she didn't have all that much screentime.
(In my first fanfic, my main character, Kurayami(Lightning and Fire Given Form), received Walburga as a gift from his grandfather-in-law, Azrael. She became his crazy maid, and I still like her from then, so she is returning.) - Grafian16dCommented
Do you mean Georg?
In the Original DxD world. The magician Gregor used it to block an attack from Chief God Odin. - Grafian16dCommented
Inari is either depicted as a young woman, or an old man, but still surprised you made him male lol.
Both God and Sage were clashing in their 'human form' or in Inari's case his demihuman form. Kurama knew how stupid it was for him to go in his giant fox form. Why the hell would he give an enemy an even bigger target to hit? - Grafian16dCommented
Yet due to your lack of mentioning her at all in the prologue chapters, she's just an unimportant rando OC to us.
Speaking of Veronica, they were good friends in all of Samael's other lives/cycles and a romantic interest in others. She was an odd one in terms of personality. So much so, that Samael was also her only friend. They were almost inseparable, and as Samael knew her already from his other lives/cycles, he didn't mind her company. She was the only person in the galaxy as of now, that 'knew' what Samael was doing, as he showed his gadgets to her. But, as she was too young, she didn't understand any of it, that's why he continued showing it to her with no problems. - Grafian16dReplied to Gilgamos
Calling something an AU doesn't magically excuse bad and lazy writing. Especially in a story that up till this point has basically all been summaries.
The Turians, seeing the 'mess' the humans made, decided to take a colony from the humans as a lesson and a warming, and thought that was the end of it, as humanity looked like a newbie species in their eyes, with no strength to retaliate. But, to their surprise, humanity fought back, expulsing the Turians from the planet and regaining the colony. But, as every action has consequences, the Turians didn't like the fact they lost a fight and decided to fight more seriously, eventually starting a war, which was called The First Contact War. - Grafian17dReplied to Pop0
You're not giving any details, so if you use it anytime in the future story, its still going to feel like a deus ex machina cheat. If you had actually described the method here, it would have been different.
... or so the galaxy thought. I will not go into detail, but there is a way to deal with indoctrination. The price is very high, though, and many people might think it's better to be dead.