John_Lemons
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John_Lemons11mthCommentedwhy not a whole invite. seems kinda rude
Then a thought came to Quinn's mind, the fact that Nate was watching gave him the chance to ask him something. He then went onto the game system and sent out a part invite to Nate.- John_Lemons1yrCommentedThis wouldn't do. Holding the umbrella although would return his stats, it would be difficult to use in a fight. One hand would be occupied holding the umbrella while the other would be free. Also, it was a big weak target that the enemy could easily destroy.
- John_Lemons1yrCommented
instant mastery
With a keen eye for martial arts, the second Nate had seen Quinn perform his flash step, he needed to know who this person was. The footwork in the skill was so beautiful, so quick, that even he wasn't able to keep track of where Quinn had gone. - John_Lemons1yrCommented
I guess Quinn doesn't get the point of video games
Most people who were playing the game would want to get stronger and better at using their abilities. That meant they would usually only select their own ability, what was the point of selecting something that you could never use in the real world, unless you just wanted to have the experience. - John_Lemons1yrCommented
or maybe claws...?
"What the…" Fei was to slow to react and all he could do was lift his hand but the blow was extremely powerful, when the red lines touched his skin it immediately caused blood to be drawn. It felt like five sharp knives were cutting him at the same time. - John_Lemons1yrCommented
phrasing
After satisfying himself enough, he finally stopped; realising that Anya would be getting bored too. - John_Lemons1yrCommented
pretty sure that was said last chapter...
His hammers were doing much more damage now that he put more points into strength and levelled up. - John_Lemons1yrCommented
seizing
Jay pounced up like a little hungry goblin, ceasing the opportunity and smashing his hammer at the level 10 statue again. - John_Lemons1yrCommented
I hope an editor joins on at some point.
Behind the throne was some diamond shaped blocks of obsidian of different shapes and sizes, though it wasn’t apparent what these were for. - John_Lemons1yrCommented
hah "play"
“Rings?” Jay decided to play it dumb. - John_Lemons1yrCommented
must have been a charisma check, otherwise why else fold so easy
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so famous you don't even have to say the name
"There'll be a party later tonight at that famous club west of town, you have to be there." - John_Lemons1yrCommented
honestly at this point it seems more like selfishness
"[I won't ask you to give up on your selflessness]," Jenna exclaimed, "[But I will follow you closely from now on]." - John_Lemons1yrCommented
well your clearly immortal
'I went overboard,' Khan sighed in his mind as he tried to enter a meditative state to stabilize his condition. The attempt immediately failed since the pain he felt didn't let him focus. - John_Lemons1yrCommented
it's safe to assume the orlats is also a third level mage? he keeps referring to the warriors level but wouldn't mage level affect the use off mana
Khan couldn't help but be in awe at the might that a single person could express. He had already seen higher-level warriors in action, but his improved sensitivity and the closed environment allowed him to appreciate that power in its entirety. - John_Lemons1yrCommented
something smells delicious... oh it's me
Khan didn't care about his appearance, especially since his whole back hurt terribly. He had been slightly late in the activation of the [Blood Shield] since the targeted area had been vast, and the smell coming from behind him didn't hint at anything good. - John_Lemons1yrCommented
hopefully it's not wanting to smash
Khan vaguely knew the Tors' anatomy from his studies back on Earth. That dark-green thing was the alien's tongue. That behavior was also one of the few pieces of information recorded in Luke's materials. The Tors was studying Khan, and he hoped for friendly reasons. - John_Lemons1yrCommented
Noah Balvan
The silver card released a sizzling noise as soon as Khan touched it. Its color changed until a random name and personal information appeared on it.