replace Platz with plain..

i have a question for those who have read more of this book. i kinda like it but the overuse of certain words and Platz n incorrect use of others begins to bother me. Did the Author managed to get an editor or is it the same in the newer chapters as well?

I really hope the Penguin has been given a name and a permanent place next to the MC. I freaking love Penguins.

I know i am 3 years late to the party but Reading the comments is honestly quite shocking. why are so many Readers so full of negative Attitude towards the book and female characters? Instead of Reading and getting an understanding of the world the Author trys to paint. Asumptions were made basing of other books? Putting that aside the comments that are being made towards any kind of female character are offputting to say the least. So much negativity. I for my part think this is shaping to be an interessting read.

I know i am one year late to the party, but in this chapter and the previous ones you wrote Irene instead of despair Queen. So it was Irene fighting against Irene. just Had to get that of my chest. Now back to catching up to the Story.

Thing is the Author doesn't do obvious twists If they want to shock you, they will shock you. i was so certain in my prediction skills in the last book and they just destroyed all expectations.

i wanted to say that this is exaggerated but then i thought about it and appart from the blood sucking mosqiutos it is actually the same.

i meant a hyperbola wich is a geometric Form of a curve. Imagine a roundish cone wich mirrors it self at one point difficult to explain when english is my third Language sorry.

I have said it a couple of chapters Back and i will repeat myself: I just love that you gave us a Story we did not wanted but you did give us a story of a piece of sh.. that focused in his state of mind more than in the evil deeds. It's awesome. I'm looking forward to your next Novell and just hope its gonna be a bit less psychotic. Just to make it clear, If it's not i will still read it, since i am hooked to the writing style.

you should not like Shang thats the whole point: showing a villain without the stereotypical focus on the deeds instaid We were given an character study of an all in all insufferable guy with a Power complex and i love it.

Perfect Assassin right? i guess He would make a good Archer. He could use bows Noone else could use due to the strength requirement plus as Long as he stays Hidden he could always quickly reposition him self wich is way easier on range.

Ok for the first time in Like twenty years i feel like my english is failing me or it's my geometry skills but how can a Pyramid be shaped like a hyperbole? Isn't that kinda excluding the other?

I am exicited. This chapter gave me Steelheart (Brandon Sanderson) vibes. I am a sucker for postapocalyptic Settings. Hoping we get to see more important supporting characters this time around.

Well the more i think about it the more i think it is actually Shang or a Version of him. Lucius just does not add up. But i like to be wrong if it is entertaining.

thats what i thought before this chapter. Now i feel like my mind is blown up and i cant think Straight.

That kinda sounds a bit disrespectfull.i mean Imagine your just finishing Up a Project where you put your heart and soul into it and someone goes : "Hey Dude nice what you have done. But i can do It better. Mind giving me that piece of you ?" I don't want to asume what the Author thinks about it but i would be offended, and down.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

I am really looking forward to your next Novell. I mean i had the feeling as a reader that there was a huge amount of learning and improvement involved between your First and this one. So whatever you decide you want to put out i will be happy to read. I didn't know that i would enjoy a villain Origin Story but here we are and it is awesome. Thank you for your awesome Work.

it is time for question 9? Or will He wait with emperor Rank for after the Level 6 studies ?

i swear If for some reason it turns out that Shang and the jester are not in some way shape or form related or different Versions of the same being. I will think for at least 2 seconds that the Author did it because there where to many guesses in that direction. I mean the more he unleashes his new traits on the World the more IT screams : "i am a Troll/ Jester."