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It was a pleasant read, although it did not lack things I personally don't like, Honestly it's annoying how you don't give a lot of moments for the romance to be good, The fanfic has a lack of steady progress in the romance, The author suddenly says that they fell in love with jaune back then in patch, it has no buildup, and for me it just feels rushed. The writing is okay it doesn't have a lot of mistakes and all good. the abilities are really op and kinda my thing.
Honestly I was done reading Stealing Spree it just didn't give me satisfaction reading the main character's interaction with the girls. And a few days later I found and interesting cover, Shiina Mashiro, I got interested and took a look, then I started reading, within 3 days I finished it. Shishio for me is okay as a main character but the problem is how slow the updates are, honestly this got me hooked more than the sis con one he wrote. I hope akikan updates this more and hopefully he doesn't drop it. I want to see Shiina actually date shishio!
I honestly think more updates, keep the writing content the same.
First of all, i am not someone who reviews things daily, so don't expect something detailed. Anyways, i approve the book, the main character is quite interesting and hopefully Ron will be so suspicious of the change, he might do something dramatic, it would be quite interesting. i look forward to reading new chapters.