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Westeri_Halbarad_3656

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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561mth
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    Are some of the paragraphs out of order? It seems he went to bed, got up put on school robes. Then greeted Hedwig, talked with roommate then pulled out his pj's and went to bed again.

    Ch 45 Moon Owl
    Harry Potter: No More Simping
    Book&Literature · Mystic_Verse
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36564mth
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    Flying on a Surfboard was cool, but riding a flying broomstick was silly. That was his point of view.
    Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood
    Book&Literature · bobthewriter
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36565mth
    Commented

    Arctic Fox

    I'd like to know which animal would be most interesting for Nathaniel to have. A Tiger? Falcon? or another? (They'll have ice powers)
    Ice Wizard in Harry Potter
    Book&Literature · Monk_of_Souls
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36565mth
    Commented

    Thought gobstones was more like marbles than chess?

    AN: Gobstone's are wizarding chess like games.
    Harry Potter: The Golden Viper
    Book&Literature · FicFrenzy
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    From late Latin meaning Pearl?

    Author's Note: The Margarita Kingdom wasn't named after the drink. Try to find where the name comes from, I'm curious to see whether someone will get it.
    Epoch: The Cursed One
    Fantasy · SlyOW
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    Was this meant to be "shop's front" instead of "chop's front"

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    Epoch: The Cursed One
    Fantasy · SlyOW
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    You might consider a replacement for 'schedule' as there are no corresponding times or dates provided for the steps in his plan.

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    Epoch: The Cursed One
    Fantasy · SlyOW
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    Perhaps 'Expand' instead of 'Expend'. Same for below.

    Skills: [Expend]
    Epoch: The Cursed One
    Fantasy · SlyOW
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    I presume you meant 'Whipping his head around', not wiping

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    Epoch: The Cursed One
    Fantasy · SlyOW
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
    Replied to Deepsea

    the angular velocity is the same, it will be the linear velocity at the surface that will be higher on terra.

    A week is still 7 days and a day has 24 hours.
    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Azrail93
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
    Replied to Taitiruk

    Troll

    "Sorry again sir, I expect a T for that class. I just can't seem to get the hang of why I would want to defend against that."
    Harry crow ( harry potter fanfic)(FINISHED)
    Book&Literature · Khaled_Sellami
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    welcome back

    Ch 23 Hello, My friends...
    Hogwarts: Novel Era of the Wizarding World
    Movies · Ryu_Akatsuki_8599
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 282 Reason
    SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 282 Reason
    SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 282 Reason
    SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 282 Reason
    SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 335 335 Minor Adjustments
    Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System
    Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 282 Reason
    SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 158 Forfeit
    SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • Westeri_Halbarad_3656
    Westeri_Halbarad_36561yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 22 New Training Regiment (2)
    Reincarnated As A Plant Life
    Fantasy · Kurai_Takahashi
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