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Nazauras21dCommented"That's an easy trick, you faker. My companion spirit can do that and more!"- Nazauras28dCommentedThe clone happened to hold the other end of this bizarre line. The powerful tribulation manifestation yanked it once, causing Ves to fly into the dangerous entity's direction!
- Nazauras1mthCommented
This is going to draw the 5 Scrolls Compact straight to Ves. I believe it was the powerful Earth scroll cultivator who was smuggled through the Gate as a statue who should be avidly watching this broadcast. It's about to get a lot more interesting, perhaps he was the one to bound Ves in chains in the future. 👍😆
"THE DESTROYER OF WORLDS HAS SECONDED MY PROPOSAL! WHO ELSE AGREES WITH THE NECESSITY OF FOUNDING A THIRD ASSOCIATION?" - Nazauras2mthCommented
Lol the programming he inherited is showing 😂
"I am a loyal servant of the Common Fleet Alliance." Sigrund repeated in a distinctly repetitive tone. - Nazauras2mthCommented
Sounds like he needs to bring a handful of living mechs to testify. And there is no way that the mech modified by the Destroyer of Worlds isn't going to be used to smear Ves
"The chance is low, but not impossible. If I were in your shoes, I would develop a contingency plan based on this possible outcome." - Nazauras2mthCommented
Perhaps i didn't read closely enough but I really want another explanation of the Ascension runes, I don't really feel I understand them completely.
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Ves running to Cynthia for answers
Though he had no idea how he could warrant such a label, Ves vowed to himself that he would never let himself end up in this sorry position! - Nazauras3mthCommented
Kai you dirty dog!
"Sorry. It was a joke. Why am I pregnant? Well... how do I explain... you see, Sunny, when a man and a woman love each other very much..." - Nazauras3mthCommented
There's gonna be a depiction of James's resurrection isn't there 😂
As Ves and Ylvaine finally started to wind down as they had managed to cover much of the surface of the Zeal with their exceptional artwork, their fused state slowly started to wind down. - Nazauras3mthCommented
Feeling unoriginal here seeing as he just wrapped up a wedding
"Based on my luck, I'm guessing… you must be the heir of this place, right?" - Nazauras3mthCommented
Here comes the MTA
"That is exactly what I am aiming for! Only with a larger and more complex social structure will subsequent generations of living mechs be able to inherit the gifts and wisdom of their elders even when their family units have broken down. Combat mechs live a violent life. It is inevitable for parents to fall. This is not a complete loss as the child mech should have already inherited a part of their spiritual strength and talents. The responsibility for raising the child mechs can be left to the grandparents, more distantly related living mechs or dedicated teacher mechs. In short, the chain of inheritance will remain unbroken as long as the living mechs grow numerous enough to form their own dynasties, and eventually an overarching civilization!" - Nazauras3mthCommented
MTA getting ready to stomp her dreams into dust
When Ves saw this mind-boggling living mech design, his mind went blank. - Nazauras3mthCommentedIf something were to happen to Zinya or her children just to satisfy his ego, Vastor would never be able to forgive himself. He would become the villain of his own story and lose the last tether of morality he desperately clung to.
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Me still wondering if Gavin can get a Companion Spirit or implants, or get a temp Gavin to replace him while he hits he EDNET. Man deserves an upgrade
"Most certainly. They will definitely seek to bind you in a deal that is similar to your arrangement with Isthmus Manufacturing. As long as you agree to design a few mechs for the Terrans, you can ask for heavy concessions in return." - Nazauras3mthPosted
System is great, the detail about the military hardware is cool, but the story didn't build up the MCs personality, I have no reason really to like him over anyone else so far after 30 or so chapters. But it really lost me at the weird fetish alot of these webnovel writers have for their sisters. The classic oh there's crisis and I gotta go save my sister and her hot friends who are helpless and are being raped. That's a tricky subject to write about even with professional writers, and 1 chapter later they are all over the trauma of it, gushing over the MC who has the personality of a potato, there's a weird moment of sexual tension with his sister (WHAT?!), and all female characters are so two dimensional it's be comical of it didn't make me sad at how the author views women. His sister then takes the throne as Queen Bimbo as she declares only she can decide who gets to be his boyfriend. It makes me doubt the author regularly talks to women from the way their dialogue is written. The system itself seems cool and I could have been down with it if the character development didn't make me cringe every chapter.
- Nazauras3mthCommented
I don't know if the author ever regularly talks to women lol. They are so two dimensional it's comical
"You guys are talking about taking my brother? Unfortunately, as his little sister, I hold the final verdict of who's going to be his girlfriend," Lisa said proudly. - Nazauras3mthCommentedTo hell with it. Ves initially wanted to act with restraint, but now he just wanted to beat Isthmus Manufacturing into submission!
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Had to reread this several times to get it
"When the Prephyx in the atmosphere gains a certain level of density, it can create a Specter. A Specter is something that can transform Prephyx into Zephyx, which is a usable form of Prephyx."