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System is great, the detail about the military hardware is cool, but the story didn't build up the MCs personality, I have no reason really to like him over anyone else so far after 30 or so chapters. But it really lost me at the weird fetish alot of these webnovel writers have for their sisters. The classic oh there's crisis and I gotta go save my sister and her hot friends who are helpless and are being raped. That's a tricky subject to write about even with professional writers, and 1 chapter later they are all over the trauma of it, gushing over the MC who has the personality of a potato, there's a weird moment of sexual tension with his sister (WHAT?!), and all female characters are so two dimensional it's be comical of it didn't make me sad at how the author views women. His sister then takes the throne as Queen Bimbo as she declares only she can decide who gets to be his boyfriend. It makes me doubt the author regularly talks to women from the way their dialogue is written. The system itself seems cool and I could have been down with it if the character development didn't make me cringe every chapter.

Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System

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