Nathan_H7
Just an average guy
of reading
47
Read books
Now they want to avoid casualties
Can you feel the plot armor?
Well they speak of power and riches plus the school hands out their own phones sooo... they kinda do be fancy
Unknown power✅
The MC must always start out at a low place to show the greatest growth. Being just average is against the rules.
Deragotory system✅
Theyre missing the sentence where she introduces herself
MC is now Harry Potter
This does not help with fixing the impression that they are not kidnappers and run a fancy school
In this context it would be “he had just graduated from a university”, not the university
Maybe they’re trieing to make more expert pilots. Force them into a situation that requires complete focus in a life or death situation to help them break through.
Thats cold, taking away a decision that shouldve been made by him
Scorpio would have been my choice
Why does he always smirk? Can he not make any other facial expression?