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Kymani_Gwinn

Kymani_Gwinn

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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    fair points all around, whole point of writing is to have fun, having a good story and plot is just a plus

    To summarize, if you don't like the fanfic then leave. if you do then thank you, I'll be updating a lot from now on.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    thought*

    'Hehehe show me more~" Tought Elysia as she looked at Otto's red face.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Replied to Mrweepknight
    "Here read these, one piece, Blach, Naruto, Jujutsu Kaiser. These are some of my favorites" she said as he handed us different books.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Replied to yellowjacket65

    good lord another man doing the good work, good job I'll carry your banner

    There's also the fact that there's been a lot of strat devil activities in the area.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Replied to Kymani_Gwinn

    this is a DXD fic it's innately drawn to harem logic

    ...mostly becuase Lavinia and Himeko would kill me but also because I am a man integrity...for the most part.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    no balls smash em all

    ...mostly becuase Lavinia and Himeko would kill me but also because I am a man integrity...for the most part.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    Azza's

    As he finally reached Azzas office he knocked on the door.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    thought*

    'As expected of my best friend ' Tought welt with a hint of smugness.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    can't even argue with it it's tradition and a valid choice

    I should probably go to Japan soon to steal Issei's [Boosted Gear].
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    he met*

    I wonder if heet Wukong yet or perhaps he never did in the first place due to this universe being an AU.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    though i became*

    Currently I am walking through the streets of Romania and back to my inn room. Today I've been going on an espionage rampage on all my castle targets, tough I becAme a bit more carefully because of yesterdays Gremory accident.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    I hate to be that guy but I'm already in too deep correcting the Grammer it's " WITH THIS SACRED TREASURE I SUMMON" can't blame you fully though you can literally change the chant with annihilation maker

    Lowering his legs, Otto over laped his arms with fist "With this treasure I summon"
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    again the exclamation point and question mark already completed the sentence, period was unnecessary

    "Whoa!, what's with that resolution!?. I bet anime would look better with that!" Said a childish voice behind me.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    question mark completed the sentence already the period was unnecessary

    I continued to take pictures of any entrances or crevices I could find. Anything that could get me inside or could tell me that this was a Vampire household or should I say castlehold?.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    which*

    It looked like one of those bridges you would see in medieval movies Wich could be moved down and up.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    presence*

    Of course I wrapped my chains aroud my body and [Sealed] my precense so that I could get past checkpoints.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    pick a side are you Gojo Jr or not

    As Lavinia finally got comfortable with me, she seems to have slipped into my bead to sleep with me, no horny btw were 12, or me at least.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    the exclamation point was a full stop already the comma was unnecessary

    "Come back quickly ok!, it's hard to sleep without hugging you~" Said Lavinia with a smile.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    which*

    "Be carefull Otto" said Himeko as she gave me a hug Wich I reciprocated.
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  • Kymani_Gwinn
    Kymani_Gwinn6d
    Commented

    Mrs. Scot? or Mrs.Scott? either way you capitalize both the name and Mrs/Mr

    As I made my way there I was greeted by the sight of the gang and Ms.scot waiting for me, probably to wish me goodbye for now.
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