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Savage_C00KIE

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE22h
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    This sentence needs to change the 'he' in 'she'.

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    Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE6d
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    This entire paragraph needs to be redone with S/she* instead of H/he.

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE6d
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    she*

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE7d
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    Vegeta*

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE8d
    Commented

    'She* said...' '...she* wants to...'

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE17d
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    "...a stroke."*

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE20d
    Commented

    This is something that just felt off but you should put - at the end of skin just to have it look 'completed'. Great chapter though!

    Awakenings- Mortal: Blood, Bone marrow, Internal organs, Reproductive system, Skin
    RWBY: Dragon's Heart
    Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi
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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE20d
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    You need to rework this entire paragraph to have female pronouns.

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE23d
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    I haven't read this so I'm giving it the benefit of the doubt. I was wondering if the main character turns into a supernatural creature or not.

    Fighting, Honour and Valhalla || Vikings x Originals x TVD Fic
    TV · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE23d
    Commented

    Could Samus go to DxD and become a Devil? Or can she go to Fairy Tail and get a dragon lacrima implanted in here to give her Dragon Slayer Magic.

    Ch 15 15: Dream journey.
    Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE24d
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    right*

    As she looked into his eyes, all she saw was someone that was already dead, devoid of any hope to live. Without any further words, she made blood gauntlets on her righ hand, and plunged two of the clawed fingers into his skull, causing bits of his brains and blood to come out of it.
    MHA: The Fresh Blood
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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE25d
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    OD*

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE26d
    Commented

    ...an* outpost...

    "I've found and outpost belonging to one of them by interrogating one of their Clansmen. Now, since their is a decent amount of them, I'm planning on gatheirng all four of us to deal with them." Jörmungandr explained.
    Naruto: The Sorcerer Supreme
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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE26d
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    "*Can I..."

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE27d
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    "*Imagine that..."

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE27d
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    her*

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE27d
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    Knight*

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE27d
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    '*In case...'

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE27d
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    "*Oh, right..."

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  • Savage_C00KIE
    Savage_C00KIE30d
    Commented

    "*No kidding,"

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