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Joshua_Hauner1yrCommentedControl is 150 meters, but swapping locations is 1000 meters? I'm guessing Control should be 1500
On the other hand, he could now obtain initial control of one's Spirit Body Threads in three seconds. He could turn a target into his marionette within fifteen seconds. His control range was 150 meters. At the same time, he could switch Spirit Body Threads, allowing his marionette to obtain all his Beyonder powers. Within a thousand meters, he could switch locations with his marionette as he wished.- Joshua_Hauner1yrCommented
Perhaps I missed something, but if they all had so many points, why didn't they just buy and level bulltor's? The succubus was shocked and scared when she saw one and questioned how mc got it, to which he responded it had to do with him not having a blessing. However, this dude just bought a bulltor himself and said he was "inspired", so I'm a bit lost. Could they all buy them all along? If they could and didn't, why was the succubus so scared of them?
[You gained five thousand blessing points. You still do not have any blessing from any god. The points are going to be stored until you got a blessing] - Joshua_Hauner2yrCommented
Can't spirit magic bypass dimensional sealing?
The dimensional spell didn't affect her phylactery since she wore it at her neck, but it still blocked all dimensional spells, making it impossible for her to Blink again. - Joshua_Hauner2yrCommented
He already told her this.
"For the record, you asked for it.... In my eyes, you looked no different than an overly full of herself bitch." - Joshua_Hauner2yrReplied to XIETIAN
Right, Zemin shared records with Lilith, which is how he knew the method would work and what he told the others. Then, he tried to share it with Yijun and failed. He told the others that he accepted Yijun's theory that soul power difference could cause failure after that. He changed his mind after Yijun failed to share the record with him. By telling the others that he learned from doing it with Lily first and that he later accepted the soul power theory, he basically admitted that the soul power problem wouldn't have been present with Lily; otherwise he wouldn't have accepted the theory. If Lily was a weak maid like everyone sees her, Zemin wouldn't be able to share records with her for the theory to hold.
Ch 390 Soul Affinity: Soul Mates (Part 2) - Joshua_Hauner2yrCommented
I only realized it as a reader that knew about Lilith's power, but if those intelligent college kids put some thought behind his words, he basically implied Lily has a strong soul power. He said he had confirmed that the method worked by sharing records with Lily. He also said that he previously accepted the theory that a difference in soul power could cause rejection, and only changed his mind at this failure. I wonder if any of them will put it together, or if it'll slip past them.
Ch 390 Soul Affinity: Soul Mates (Part 2) - Joshua_Hauner2yrCommented
Not sure why MC wouldn't include red eyes in the information given to the public
"The doomsday is coming !! you people with red eyes will only endanger the rest of us. pick up your weapon and kill as many of them as you can!! - Joshua_Hauner2yrCommented
"Meanwhile, spirit power is the measure of one's talent in weaving the elemental energy of the universe. It is measured by three categories: spirit strength, spirit control and spirit capacity. Increasing spirit power will be everybody's main task and it won't be easy. Only when a person breaks through spirit power 30 will be the time anyone of you will be able to use basic elements and reach rank 2 acolyte." Why does it say Rank 3 Magician when the other novel says 30 spirit power is at rank 2 Acolyte
[Congratulations! You are now a Rank 3 Magician] - Joshua_Hauner2yrCommented
I just can't understand why he hasn't even used partial transformation.
As if that wasn't bad enough, he also had a limited amount of spirit force to use! - Joshua_Hauner2yrCommented
Meanwhile, if he used his brain and walked with his high-level roommates he'd be completely safe.
Moby inwardly cursed. She was way too powerful for him to take care of at his current power level. - Joshua_Hauner2yrCommented
Met*
"I've got nothing to do with them. This is just the second time I meet them." Orpal said, feeling more cornered by the second. - Joshua_Hauner2yrCommented
But he's called Lith brother before. I think it's an author's mistake.
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Marcus thought* not marcel
'Shit, does he have a Space Blessing? I haven't seen anyone with such a Blessing for over ten years that I had forgotten how powerful they are... Now I understand why Marcel is so confidence in this boy, even though he is young and probably just a Blessed Rank D. Because he has a Space Blessing, he can deal with Blessed and Fortresses of a higher rank... Even if I don't like the boy, I can't try to prevent a Blessed with a Spatial Blessing from joining our family. That alone will attract many talented young people after seeing that we have a Blessed who can manipulate space.' Marcel thought of several things while watching the battle unfold. - Joshua_Hauner2yrCommented
at any risk/danger*
Staying in the city of Eyrin was the safest place, since with his current strength there were hardly any people to challenge him. However, even though his and his family's life were not at any in that place, Noah's heart yearned for adventures. - Joshua_Hauner2yrPosted
It's an excellent story. It's probably a bit premature to rank the update consistency yet, as this review is done with only five chapters out. However, the chapters are exceptionally long by webnovel standards. With over 3000 words per chapter, each one is roughly equivalent to three chapters that I'm used to on this site. That is to say, the initial release was essentially 15 chapters with a promise of more to come. Personally, I really enjoy the dialogue. I find it very realistic for the age group, with an appropriate balance of comedy and seriousness. Although I'm not certain what will happen, there appears to be a lot of foreshadowing and world building, which I very much enjoy. The subtle hints about the MC's powers before they manifested were really well placed. All in all, I hope this story picks up more traction so that the author will publish more.
- Joshua_Hauner3yrCommented
Four hundred thousand* Not forty thousand
"Of the forty thousand people, we want a hundred thousand for the royal family," Stephanie said as she headed out of the manor. "A hundred fifty thousand for the Temple of Light and a hundred fifty thousand for the other nobles, we'll arrange it all. But the question is, how do you get the people here?" - Joshua_Hauner3yrCommented
Just to be clear, isn't this expansion the thing the game developers told Roland and Schuck to avoid due to having too much data in one place? Or was that something else?
"Tell us about the Realm of Devils Expedition." Schuck looked at Roland. - Joshua_Hauner3yrCommented
Author, you need to work on keeping your gender pronouns consistent. You keep switching between he/him and she/her. 'ask him anything' 'She's the one' At this point, the assassin's *** isn't even clear. Otherwise, excellent story.
"You don't need to ask him anything, Teacher. She's the one who killed George. If we send her and the one from before, maybe George's family will be able to track them." Kai said.