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Small note, kryptonite is the dumbest way to weaken superman. I mean, how can it be, that a small krypton mineral ends up on earth. Let's not talk about the distance between Earth and Krypton. What is the probability that a piece of Kryptonite will end up on Earth?
Enough
Superman -> Thragg -> Nolan (Not counting kryptonite, etc.)
1000 years basking in the sun, and this is its power
Esto, pero con un asa unida a la empuñadura.
Sin duda es interesante, pero no te voy a mentir, me hubiera ido con un rev-9. No es la mejor pelicula, pero siempre he visto el rev-9 como la fusion entre un t850 y un t1000
I'm pretty sure Artorias wasn't a lord. The Lords were the 4 original holders of the souls. (Gwyn, Nito, Witch of the Izalith and Furtive Pygmy) Artorias would be a deity with a very small part of Gwyn's soul.
The problem is that there are several chapters in which he has focused on nothing more than strengthening his army. And that's fine, but maybe it would be better to do it in 1 or 2 chapters summarizing everything that has improved, instead of every 2 chapters do one dedicated to improving a friend / general / etc. It's my point of view, but it's your book, and you have to do it the way you like it best.