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right, just some reader criticism so just take this as a grain of salt, but can we get more character developing chapters? i feel like the past 20 chapters or so are just greet fighting followinf a rough sequel. he shows up, isn't at peak, everyone criticizes him and underestimates him, he shows off some talent following his battle strategy, then he keeps wowing people then he wins and next battle. idk their good, i like them, i just want a change of pace if that makes sense
uhhh, can I have explanation of physical strength again cause I'm confused. like if he's in the sage plane why wouldn't his body also be in the sage plane? or are planes for cultivation and physical health different somehow? like if he's is in the 3 stage of sage why isn't is body also second stage of sage?
ok this is ridiculous you have more privlaged chapters right now than there are chapters we're able to read. and while I normally buy privlaged on a single book per month, I'm not buying 30+ chapters of privlage. why are you doing this and don't take that rudely this is just me wondering what's going on because I'm starved for chapters, and I can't afford privelage right now and especially not for that many probably ever.
righto, writing this at chapter thirty. story is great so far, and you already see lots of action happening. very quick development but hot a lot of info waves coming at you. world does have some theme to it but not overly detailed though the author has always been able to fix this and he's promised it so I'm going to assume amazing world. all the characters have their own definement, though as of now, one of them needs more defining in my opinion as she seems to just be a yes sister. otherwise, this book is definitely a book you should add to your library. also from what I've seen, it's not like most other werewolf books but does have some elements in it. pretty great so far.