The story is overall great with only minor spelling mistakes here and there. The plot development is great, with many great decisions being taken by the author all throughout, and this is the only thing that keeps the 'story development' category at a respectable 3 stars after the truly horrible ending to this otherwise great series.

That would be like saying a kid can never become stronger than their parents since they were technically create by Them, but that isn't the case. In other words, a creation can grow stronger than the creator.

just like many people in real life...

incredible story, I'm generally a big fan of archery powers, so this was literally perfect for me, it has good lore, is interesting and has creative powers + power usage. while the writing quality isn't quite up to 5* standards, the rest if the story makes up for it, resulting in me giving it that grade as i think it's a 5* in general, not ~4,5* as we novel would otherwise take my review as.

It's great so far, and I can't wait to read more when it is released. great work! this section is here so i can actually post this review.....

it's great so far. continue the good work.

do you mean grillfriend?

Few men

The others cost 1 originally and the one he chose cost two, which meanshe saved points

They did

probably basic knowledge that they are large in his earlier life

weapons

immunities often have a limit (it's just that it's basically impossible to reach) I think that's why.

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so basically, an mc that acts more like a human being is bad? And the part about him cowering before enemies and extorting his friends is quite simply not true.

I know the story is long, but everything is slowly explained along the way. A big part of the story are the mysteries (like how the genes work), the parts where people who aren't trained soldiers can just go in is just you not understanding 2 things 1: That humans are greedy. and 2: that if you make it in the sanctuary, you've just given yourself and your descendants a free ride on 1st class. The spaceship thing probably has most to do with the fact that 1: it's incredibly safe. they can easily travel in mechs and shit, they aren't afraid of the spaceship malfunctioning, to them it's like what a luxury car is to us, just because there is a luxury car doesn't mean well panic and be afraid if it malfunctioning.

the *********** spells w u x i a w o r l d

I have a tip for you. Search for: super gene chapter (which chapter you're at) and then pick either **********.site or novelfull, I've never had any problem with those sites. If you don't have an ad block, you will get ads, but I've never gotten any inappropriate ones. The sites are free, and they have just as many chapters as here (maybe a slight bit less).

He is dedicated to one woman, but multiple women like him (not that any other relationships occur)

The story is great, I've read more than 2800 chapters by now (I do recommend reading the story on a non pay to view site, as it's literally the same content, except you don't have to pay to read it). The main character is both lucky and skilled, but though his luck may seem too good, there are also times when he just isn't lucky at all (though it usually does benefit him in some obscure way). The only reason I've given it 4 stars i. writing quality is that i don't remember the writing quality of most if the early chapters, only their contents, but the latter ones don't have any problems.