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0Dev_Das02yrCommentedCh 23 Chapter 9.3- 0Dev_Das02yrPosted
Okay I was actually curious about this work because it said โdarkโ in hash tags, and Iโm all in for it. Leafed through several chapters and got absorbed into the story and how well written it was. From grammar to punctuation to dialogues to characters - all seems enthralling. Iโd recommend people to give this one a try, as it is authorโs first work outside of their genre. I think itโs brilliant ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
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Found this novel through discord chat, wanted to give it a try because the name of the story was so compelling, and was not disppointed! It took me a bit to get through several chapters as it was hooking and very descriptive. The chapters are a perfect length and the characters develop nicely as you get to know them more and more, chapter after chapter. I hope the author reads it and sees the praise : ITS AMAZING!! ๐๐ผ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐คฉ
- 0Dev_Das02yrReplied to XXXXCCh 1 GOOD GIRL.
- 0Dev_Das02yrCommentedCh 23 Chapter 9.3
- 0Dev_Das02yrReplied to Bright_Gabriel_9341Ch 13 DIGGING GRAVES.
- 0Dev_Das02yrReplied to Bright_Gabriel_9341Ch 11 I STILL HAD HER.
- 0Dev_Das02yrReplied to Bright_Gabriel_9341Ch 10 REPEATING HISTORY.
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Looooooooool he sure knows how to keep his juices flowing when they need to ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ
When I had gotten up from the bed, I felt a sharp kick in my stomach. And when I tried walking towards the door, an excruciating, burning pain in between my legs prevented me from moving. - 0Dev_Das02yrReplied to Bright_Gabriel_9341
Ppppphahahha! Thatโs a good story ๐คฃ๐คฃ thanks for sharing lol! I myself a few times had a food attack. So hungry I was ready to commit murder ๐ฅถ๐ฅถ๐ฅถ luckily I had my snacks on timeโฆotherwise id catch a case
I did not bother to ask myself those questions. Didn't have a care in the world. I only opened my mouth acceptingly and gawped at the laughing bloody eyes of Asmodeus as my teeth sank greedily into the swollen juicy flesh. And let me tell you, this was the fruit made in heaven, so obscenely delicious and flavorful it was. - 0Dev_Das02yrReplied to ChubbyLiv
Hahahahahaha weโll have to see
"I need the names of the other too." I murmured through tears, fondling her back. - 0Dev_Das02yrReplied to ChubbyLiv
YESSSS! ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ
This paragraph has been deleted. - 0Dev_Das02yrReplied to ChubbyLiv
Ugh I hate it. Will have to fix that shit
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0 to 100 REAL QUICK
I didn't know how to act, what to do with myself, with my limbs, how to place them, where to sit to not appear too big for that little room. To not, in any way, seem too much for her at the moment. I heard her ask then, "I thought you'd be asleep by now. Why have you come back?" - 0Dev_Das02yrReplied to ChubbyLiv
Yes, you can in creative writing use different verbs for more emphasis in a characterโs voice
"Whyโฆdid theyโฆdo itโฆ?" I wheezed at last. - 0Dev_Das02yrReplied to ChubbyLiv
HAHAHAAHAHAHAHA I love that gosh youโre the best with your little gifs ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ
"๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐." - 0Dev_Das02yrReplied to ChubbyLiv
My pleasure ๐
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