Where ur says “I saw those things dragging the people that are barely alive…..” it should be “ I saw those things dragging people….” The ‘the’ isnt supposed to be there. :) just advice

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Im rally enjoying this story as theres not a lot of storys on here that can entertain my so i hope you can carry on updating plz😅💔💔💔💔💔