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I don't know if this is a good thing or a bad thing. I'm interested in what is going on with Angy more than I'm with the main character, which sucks because she gets only 30 seconds of what is going on with her. It randomly goes back to Gustav then I have to wait for 5 or 10 chapters to see an update on her. Not I don't enjoy what is going on with Gustav. It just does not interest me all that much.
So you build up this demon king, and all the heroes in the story yet Haven't met the main character but then you throw aliens out of nowhere in this story. I get you are into space but come on, man, you need to let this story breathe a little. Try not to go too many eggs in the basket.
I think someone needs to tell Matilda to look up the definition of stalking because what she just said is entirely different from what stalking is.
Ah, I believe there was Misunderstand of my words. Then again, no one can read emotions online test messages. I wasn't criticizing you; I was praising you. Not many people could keep their characters in place. For this long of a period, my apologies if I offended you.
You sure are good at making Gustav seem like an emotionless robot. The more he moves forward, the more he leaves these behinds, and the more he losers himself.
It's weird how one thing can change how I feel about wanting to keep reading the story or drop it. I don't think telling someone he only knows for four days about his Secret is a wise choice to do. In chapter 41, he already told someone that feels way too early to be speaking about the System. I don't know if this is you doing this on purpose to make the story go faster, or you are trying to set something up, but either way, it gives me some mixed feelings right now.
Well, that is one way to get rid of your love interest or whatever Gustav thinks of her, but all in all, fascinating choice you made with Angy. I'm interested to see how she does by herself without Gustav. Hopefully, we get some chapters with her point of view because I feel after this chapter we probably won't see her in a long time seeing how Gustav is already putting his plan to avoid her. Keep up the excellent work.
Is Matilda gay/bisexual? I don't care; I'm just curious, or is this one of those friendship love??