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Thanks_rona1yrReplied to VastokingThanks man 👨
I WANT LEMONS- Thanks_rona1yrPosted
I am have read up to chapter 205 so I will be rating it from there. This book has high potential, but it is very frustrating to read, there genuinely are good moments in this story,but you have to go through a mire of misunderstanding, clichés, and more BS. The characters are some of the most annoying parts of the story, the lack of communication is criminal half of the problem can be fixed with a reasonable talk or some common sense. If you want to read this you have to be able to wade through sooo much nonsense.
- Thanks_rona1yrReplied to Storm_Creator
He literally just died💀
“Well then! It looks like the bodies of these people are stronger than those from my previous world. This Leylin is even inferior to a girl…..I’m starting to feel embarrassed for him…..” - Thanks_rona1yrCommentedCh 89 Nathan’s Thoughts[1]
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It was a good bing read but it can be very boring to go through at times. The author repeats a lot of info like the readers are slow, that really messes with the pacing. There is a notable lack nuance in the characters, making them seem one sided and boring. Other than that I like the power system u have set up and fact that the Mc has a job is a nice touch. Keep up the good work and improve when u can!!
Ch 89 Nathan’s Thoughts[1] - Thanks_rona1yrReplied to The_Demon_Child
Yea caught the same feeling
This paragraph has been deleted. - Thanks_rona1yrReplied to gamabunda4873
It allows you dash really fast. It the game is a fantastic early game item. Letting it’s user to rapidly avoid danger.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Thanks_rona1yrReplied to Cat_Tip
You can see the mental degradation in one comment section. I love it!
...I had to admit that it was more than a bit awkward being breastfed though. While not my first time seeing an attractive woman's breast, it was definitely my first having it shoved in my face and sucking on it. - Thanks_rona1yrCommented
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This was not only due to the increase in his magic after merging with Boggart's blood, but also because his Transfiguration Charm had been upgraded to level five, greatly reducing the amount of magic required to cast it. - Thanks_rona1yrCommented
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"Disillusionment!" - Thanks_rona1yrCommented
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"I think they'll find a way!" Dumbledore, knowing full well that Ivan could perform Transfiguration, simply took Ron with him, placing his right hand on Ron's shoulder and waving the Elder Wand with his left. - Thanks_rona1yrCommentedCh 51 Luke
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- Thanks_rona1yrReplied to GrimxReaperCh 28 Boss
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