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pregnancies2dPostedI've read up to chapter 197, and the characters are well-rounded, with just the right pace of development. The dialogue is excellent and not cliche. The translation is top-notch as well, with only two pronoun issues. It feels very human and very Chinese without the usual overbearing nonsense. I was a sucker for the staircase climbing scene as well as the ice-cream and river scenes. Well worth the read. Thank you, author.
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The author is sabotaging themself with bombastic dialogue at the expense of ACTUAL GRAMMAR. The characters are flat and uninteresting. The MC is blessed with godlike skills for no apparent reason. The list goes on ad nauseam. Basically, the premise showed potential, but the actual story needs a rework from the ground up.
Ch 16 Hidden Quest - pregnancies5mthCommentedCh 9 Group?
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- pregnancies6mthCommentedCh 239 The Uproar Before the Game (Part 3)
- pregnancies6mthReplied to Venerable_CatCh 4 Doomsday Roulette, Zombie Army
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Narrative past tense: was about to change
Earth, a planet inhabited by an enormous number of living beings, of which the most spread out are us, the humans. People were walking around, going to their jobs, and just doing their everyday routine, fully unaware that everything is about to change... - pregnancies7mthCommented
Flagrant*
"Damn this. I never felt pain like this in my previous life. Just what kind of missions am I coming across, for the human rights abuse to be so fragrant?" Jake wondered. - pregnancies7mthCommented
never mind that / ignoring that*
He knew exactly how impossible it was to get to the tiers higher than the sixth tier. After the sixth tier, each tier ascension was impossibly difficult. And never minding that, getting to the next levels was also too difficult. - pregnancies7mthCommented
Up to*
"Two thousand gold coins for the basic stables, that can handle unto ten tamed monsters." - pregnancies7mthCommented
Its* possessive
The moment he touched one of them, he heard a roar. And this time, he knew that the roar was directed toward him. The Gojira was done fighting. The two dinosaurs were dead, and now, it saw that a pest was in front of it's eggs? It's children? That was simple unacceptable. - pregnancies7mthCommented
Which sock? Why, the left one, of course.
"Patience, my boy. When we get there, you will thank yourself for letting me keep my mouth shut. The surprise, well the surprise will knock your sock off. But let me be very clear. It is going to be a leveling ground that is above our levels. It is for levels thirty and above, while you are in level twenty, and I am in level eleven. Make sure that you do not get hit by the monsters you see even once." Jake warned him. - pregnancies7mthReplied to Iree_VaydraMinx
Lol
"Kurahhh!" It streeched, biting the air in front of it like a rapid dog, desperately wanting to quench on the human flesh. - pregnancies7mthReplied to Danbomber
Chinese math.
Yao Shier thought for a moment and said, "Make it three seats. I'm bringing my disciple."detailAfter Becoming a Solo Player, My Unlimited Skills Made Me InvincibleUrban · Traversing Nine Realms - pregnancies8mthReplied to Pachinco
People die when they are killed.
"Saving it might bring it back to life." - pregnancies8mthPosted
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Don't worry about the pronouns; the prepositions alone are a nightmare.
"R-right." Jesse grabbed the reins, thankful for her stepmother's kindness, and felt more confident after having an expert at horseback riding beside him. - pregnancies8mthReplied to MediocreSkater
A pp stabbed through his pp. Ouch.
At that moment, Karma let out a scream as an arrow stabbed through his arrow. He shrieked and stood up, then looked towards the archer. Nora, the leader of Stormdawn, calmly stood in the middle of crow corpses.