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What is IOU?
Grandfather villain, actually Saintly Star provoke MC first, if he silent like good boy, MC will not disturb him. (─.─||)
i know, but how do they know information if they not come to that garden?
How do you know? doesn't that mean you have mean to teleport but MC already gone? if it's true, then it's little annoying.
I agree ancestor. Why every pro player here always bullying newbie?
i think they will grow hate rather than reverence. Who will reverence people who are disturbing their victory party against Sea Corpse Race? ( ̄ヘ ̄;)
I think the story of this novel is better like this : One day, Ren was killed by assassin because he knew World Quest and had a history of leaking information. After being killed suddenly he returns to the past before the VR game was launched. Ren then enjoys time with his parents in Zone C then he asks permission to stay in Zone A to focus on his gaming career on the pretext of preparing to enter college. Ren then bought a cheap VR pod, then he chose a non-subclass Sprite character. Then he completes Quests to get the First Clear/First Blood reward. Especially Ren is very happy to get Pet Pii and Crystal Chest (Skill/Spell Book unique). Pet Pii has the most important ability which is Evolution which means Pet Pii when its HP reaches 1, it will evolve by copying and multiplying ATP (Attribute) 2 times of all the enemies it was fighting for 5 minutes. Ability can only be done once a day. Ren then went to all the Dungeons and Quests made by the developer to be impossible to complete in early game. But Ren finishes it with Pii's Pet Evolution ability. Ren then collects Crystal Chests to get a unique Skill/Spell Book which he eventually becomes a Top Gamer forever. The End.
The story will be quite short and comfortable if the author reduces the PoV stories of side characters. And here are some things I hate about this novel : 1. Ren should have hit Leonel on the head from the start to wake up from his naivety. 2. Ren should have secretly recorded Lira and Rox's incident and uploaded it on the internet anonymously so that Rox would be saved from trouble from the start instead of waiting for the idiot Leonel to solve the problem. 3. Ren should have taken the Skill/Spell Book from the Crystal Chest that Leonel got from the Hidden Boss Ice Troll. Ren said that the gift of one Crystal Chest can get a player into the Top Leaderboard then why did you let go of the gift and let the idiot Leonel give the gift to Scar who is your own enemy?!! HE CAN GOT STRONGER IDIOT. I know you have Plot Armor, still you should minimize threat from your own enemy. (ʘ言ʘ╬) 4. Ren should have thought about the Timeline difference to Evie being told to go to the Illusion Forest. Evie was supposed to go when she was strong but Ren told her to go when she was weak. At least when Evie left, Ren should have accompanied her from the start so that Rakusha's Hidden Boss was not Kill Steal by Michael Group. 5. The author should stop giving a lot of annoying side characters who are spoiled, beautiful/handsome, and rich people. I know that the author wants to focus on getting a lot of coins (More coins from readers, more money earned) from WebNovel by multiplying chapters with annoying side character PoVs. But at least the author should focus on the main story and make a faster development on the side characters whose development is very slow (Which they are still very stupid). We as readers should be given more the main story according to the description of the novel that the author made. We are not a bot who does not care about the quality of the novel.
The story will be quite short and comfortable if the author reduces the PoV stories of side characters. And here are some things I hate about this novel : 1. Ren should have hit Leonel on the head from the start to wake up from his naivety. 2. Ren should have secretly recorded Lira and Rox's incident and uploaded it on the internet anonymously so that Rox would be saved from trouble from the start instead of waiting for the idiot Leonel to solve the problem. 3. Ren should have taken the Skill/Spell Book from the Crystal Chest that Leonel got from the Hidden Boss Ice Troll. Ren said that the gift of one Crystal Chest can get a player into the Top Leaderboard then why did you let go of the gift and let the idiot Leonel give the gift to Scar who is your own enemy?!! HE CAN GOT STRONGER IDIOT. I know you have Plot Armor, still you should minimize threat from your own enemy. (ʘ言ʘ╬) 4. Ren should have thought about the Timeline difference to Evie being told to go to the Illusion Forest. Evie was supposed to go when she was strong but Ren told her to go when she was weak. At least when Evie left, Ren should have accompanied her from the start so that Rakusha's Hidden Boss was not Kill Steal by Michael Group. 5. The author should stop giving a lot of annoying side characters who are spoiled, beautiful/handsome, and rich people. I know that the author wants to focus on getting a lot of coins (More coins from readers, more money earned) from WebNovel by multiplying chapters with annoying side character PoVs. But at least the author should focus on the main story and make a faster development on the side characters whose development is very slow (Which they are still very stupid). We as readers should be given more the main story according to the description of the novel that the author made. We are not a bot who does not care about the quality of the novel.
She say "Nothing you can do against bright violet core Awakened", but in the next paragraph she also say "i'm barely yellow core". Wdym???