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i have read but still don't get it, he is in a new world who has cultivation in it but assume he is somehow gonna be killed or worse by someone immdailty and he don't plan to just to safe...no he plans to make someones Life painfully for no f reason but that to gain "MC Plot Power" this is no a Logic of someone who just comes to a new world.. that is they thoughs of a edgy boy.
by make his whole life to kill someone he never meet or know and who knows if deserve to be slowly killed...
(1) great start and nice Mc Background buliding! (2) but one question why he want to kill they Mc of Plane? they is no reason so far only his Knowing of some webnovels and who knows how true they are to a original world? is he a Evil Mc? because a neutral or good MC would't go his his first hour to think of how slowly to kill someone he never meet or know if he can't changed the need for a Fight against him...
Dude just a few CP ago he was think about getting all the three Beauties for himself because he is so great and deserve it cause he was reborn...lol in fact all what he is doing is for fame and Power
ah Freedom' forceful changing the world, making people Fight in a world that he made so that He becomes the King. Yuki is just a Edge boy lol. he Project his childhood pain on to the whole system.
we don't know for sure if she was alywas stronger then him after all his Father die 6 years ago and if she is in a Sect in a different Place where they Spiritual Thing is more dense so of course she has now a high Level after all one is dead and can't become stronger anymore.
he was a simple men? huh? he was the last 5 years in a coma the room he is in don't was made by request of himself. so we're it can be said he is simple in his taste in how his room Looks? beside, for a the first Human reaching the God Leve he had much trust in a Kid "I promise" hope he made a seal in the MC to make sure don't betray him right?
what is wrong with That dude? she already broke up with him and told him she got a new Boyfriend...yes it not nice but what do can do now? let it go man :D nice Chapter and still one of the best Storys with Netori + Harem ✓
Sadly I thought this could have be a good Novel but it ain't..'Rape' some and then saying I take responsible it bullshit. and then this God Level Treasury Shit is only Autor plot to let Her Stay by His side cause she was not even Close near His Level... And this in Future calling sister...bish He raped her and you dare to say that Like now she belongs to him?
why has a 5 old child ***? No Evil don't mean you have to sleep with others at That Young age . and to be real I find it very hard to Like any Story we're a MC who was Kind and good hearted turning Evil and rutless Just because He got treated real Bad. would that not be the seem as saying yeah the Bad Guys we're right. why giving yourself up Like That Well it only My thought about it...
thanks for the Ch, still I would Like to ask how Long will this Story be? 300ish or more. :)