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Phantom_Rider_15509mthReplied to HaushFive year old brain, therefore five year old hormones
It was… so horrendous.- Phantom_Rider_155010mthCommented
Without descriptions is best. You underestimate a reader's memory. They will go back 400 chapters just to read the first description of a skill and ask why you changed what it does
So I was curious. Would you rather have the skills and descriptions that 'may' be bought later in chapters, or do you only want the direct results? Or perhaps a midpoint? Like only giving the skill name but only showing the description of those he actually buys. - Phantom_Rider_155010mthReplied to HIKARU_GENJIHe felt revulsion as his thoughts went into the gutter.
- Phantom_Rider_155010mthCommented'Ugh. Fuck. I should stop already.'
- Phantom_Rider_155010mthReplied to YaroomHe felt like he had been cleaned in and out of all filth and was now feeling very good. He wondered if it was something like what happened in those Xianxias when the MC cleansed their bodies off of all the impurities but it did not really matter.
- Phantom_Rider_155010mthReplied to Kiyan_Tribe
I mean it's edible....just as long as my mom doesn't find out
Cecilia seemed quite offended to which Adam just shrugged with a sneer on his face, "I mean. Spaghetti with Ketchup is pretty easy to make. I don't even know if it can be called a homemade dish or not." - Phantom_Rider_155010mthPosted
Okay. This is my first review so I did not know it wasn't a simple 1 to 5 stars. If it was i swear I would've given 5 stars but I'm not the only one who knows Parmesan's updating schedule. I know it exists now but it didn't before. Anyway now that I've given a reason for not giving 5 stars (Don't kill me), Ican get down to the story. This was definitely a new experience for me as this introduced me to the eavesdropping genre. I hadn't realized until then but I'd never thought about how life would go if other people could heat your thoughts. And the author writes it all out beautifully. On to the pacing. This particular book is abysmally slow, buy you won't realize it unless you take a step back (and even then you might miss it)May the spoilers (not really spoilers) begin.First we are introduced to C. a human stickman. That isn't really what he is, but as he is faceless, it's a good analogy.Yup. it's exactly as I said it, a faceless mc. Check the tags again. Harem? Check. He rizzed them up without a face. That's pretty hard to beat, but I digress. Throughout the course of the story so far we are introduced to what you would call "cookie cutter characters" A shy but handsome 'mc' , a proper class president, an overprotective childhood friend and so on. But remember, this is a yandere novel. So throw morals out the window. With this author though, that still isn't enough. Read and you'll see why
- Phantom_Rider_155010mthReplied to SirFawziBut no. I did not do what my heart had told. My mind had other plans. Furthermore, if I returned to C just to be free from the shackles of the game, would it be exploiting his generosity?
- Phantom_Rider_155010mthReplied to Littlesilly114
How does any of this relate to anything?
Those idiots learned how quickly one's social life can be destroyed when I had the attention of several hundred million followers, not to mention the fact that I learnt how to physically hurt someone too. I did not write that BDSM novella without research you know? - Phantom_Rider_155010mthReplied to Draekai
Oh you're the author! hello!
Then Father decided that trying to live a debt-ridden life was too much for him so he simply just up and left one night without another word, handing over his debt to me. - Phantom_Rider_155011mthCommented
Authors are cruel people. Cain's picture had been painted incredibly badly so far (I hate him tbh) but later on we might find out his side of the story, or discover something proving he's a good guy. Then we're forced to choose whether to keep heating him or stop. I hope I'm wrong and I can hate him as much as I want to
(AN: Cecilia did not instantly begin liking Adam. It took time and effort before she was able to truly consider him as her own son rather than just an adoptive son or the son of a monster. Now she loves him more than anyone and anything in the world. I hope you liked this dive in Cecilia's back story.) - Phantom_Rider_155011mthCommented
Being broke (more or less) makes this choice so much easier
(Don't wanna wait? Patreon can save ya!) - Phantom_Rider_155011mthCommented
Yes. Go off on an entire arc to find their children and kill them. Because plot!
'Massacre their young!' - Phantom_Rider_155011mthReplied to En4cer1244
Wrong order. Skulls for the skull throne
'I will crush their skulls!' - Phantom_Rider_155011mthCommented
Read the last sentence. Now read it again. Now realize you can't unsee it. You're welcome
I used the power of the explosion to twist my body to face the ground holding both wolves in a forced hug. They were under my body as we collided with the ground. I forced their bodies into the ground with all my power. - Phantom_Rider_155011mthReplied to Duke_Asmodeus
If you laughed, then yes, you are a bad person. though now I want to laugh
"Heh, well, if it isn't the defeated dog, Agora! Why are you here? Do you want me to massacre your entire pack again?"