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Five year old brain, therefore five year old hormones
Without descriptions is best. You underestimate a reader's memory. They will go back 400 chapters just to read the first description of a skill and ask why you changed what it does
I mean it's edible....just as long as my mom doesn't find out
Okay. This is my first review so I did not know it wasn't a simple 1 to 5 stars. If it was i swear I would've given 5 stars but I'm not the only one who knows Parmesan's updating schedule. I know it exists now but it didn't before. Anyway now that I've given a reason for not giving 5 stars (Don't kill me), Ican get down to the story. This was definitely a new experience for me as this introduced me to the eavesdropping genre. I hadn't realized until then but I'd never thought about how life would go if other people could heat your thoughts. And the author writes it all out beautifully. On to the pacing. This particular book is abysmally slow, buy you won't realize it unless you take a step back (and even then you might miss it)May the spoilers (not really spoilers) begin.First we are introduced to C. a human stickman. That isn't really what he is, but as he is faceless, it's a good analogy.Yup. it's exactly as I said it, a faceless mc. Check the tags again. Harem? Check. He rizzed them up without a face. That's pretty hard to beat, but I digress. Throughout the course of the story so far we are introduced to what you would call "cookie cutter characters" A shy but handsome 'mc' , a proper class president, an overprotective childhood friend and so on. But remember, this is a yandere novel. So throw morals out the window. With this author though, that still isn't enough. Read and you'll see why
How does any of this relate to anything?
Oh you're the author! hello!
Authors are cruel people. Cain's picture had been painted incredibly badly so far (I hate him tbh) but later on we might find out his side of the story, or discover something proving he's a good guy. Then we're forced to choose whether to keep heating him or stop. I hope I'm wrong and I can hate him as much as I want to
Being broke (more or less) makes this choice so much easier
Yes. Go off on an entire arc to find their children and kill them. Because plot!
Wrong order. Skulls for the skull throne
Read the last sentence. Now read it again. Now realize you can't unsee it. You're welcome
If you laughed, then yes, you are a bad person. though now I want to laugh