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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal11mth
    Commented

    Meaning all of the reddit mods

    'Only a dumbass who has nothing better to do in his life would work for free.'
    Ultimate System Creator
    Fantasy · ShadowKatake
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal11mth
    Commented

    So, imma say it...the writing style feels like it is trying too hard to feel sophisticated but it isn't. This style of writing is more suited for a work that has ongoing ideological conflicts. But here it feels like it is forced. I mean the story and premise are good but it doesn't feel natural. The content and the writing style mismatch

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    I am the 4th Hokage
    Anime & Comics · SHEPERD
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Posted

    ch.53 made me drop it. its inhumanely racist. fk this shit.

    Marvel Plane Trader
    Anime & Comics · FicNovels
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    i'd have to drop this i think

    Of course, being a conscientious person, Josh despised human trafficking. But if it was selling Japanese chicks, that was another matter. Japanese were not humans, so there was no problem.
    Marvel Plane Trader
    Anime & Comics · FicNovels
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    so a day is longer than 40 hours there? is this canon?

    «Report. Approximately, 2 days and 40 hours»
    Starting The Group Chat With Solo Players
    Anime & Comics · Door_kun
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    I wear them so people don't talk to me

    Sam understood the old people, but those that were his age? Yeah, no, science and studies have proven that masks had almost 0 impact in the spread of the virus.
    Isekai System
    Anime & Comics · Xeno_Elemental
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    i wanna see something new. so +1. Also I think it would be great if would great if you trie something new and not become like everyone else. So please try giving the mc and marie route a go.

    2.Marie do be love interest to the mc.
    ITWO
    Anime & Comics · JunkyAuthor
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    shrine right?

    Masahiro smiled and continued. "I thought of creating a church for the God of Light in our Uzumaki Country!"
    NARUTO: I BECAME A GOD
    Anime & Comics · NunuXD
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Replied to Isseisenpai

    It was a stolen work. He stole it from fanfictionnet

    火影忍者:欲望游戏
    Anime & Comics · YAMRAAJ_021
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    ....yes

    Harem all day e'ry day(Yes).
    BNHA: Singularity
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    i like the first one

    Author note here: After some feedback, I decided to create an alternative version of the last chapter. Which of the two is canon? Fuck I dont know, if you like the over-top crazy MJ in the first one if you think the second one has more sense in the story, the second one.
    A Dash of Black: Harem of Symbiotes
    Anime & Comics · Spiderling
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    Bruh Did ou took its entire stomach out? You know the 4d pocket is separate and can be removed right?

    The white pocket looked so small and unremarkable, Naeim removed the golden bell from it and put it back where it came from, the 4D pocket remained without any frills.
    Bringing The Animes Items To The Real World
    Anime & Comics · RyuGin
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    no. only do that after you are finished with marvel. imo

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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    Uraraka*

    "And to the right! We have the powderpuff of power! The angel of anti-gravity! And the one I'm personally rooting for..." The leather-clad man whispered the last part. "OCHAKO URURAKAAAAAAAA!"
    MHA: Izuku The Villain
    Anime & Comics · Toji_Fushigoro
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    didn't neji died in the fourth war? so this is an au then?

    "He's in good hands." Neji smiled and replied. "Hokage-sama is actually counting on him to find a wife quickly."
    My First Wife Is Not A Naive Ghost
    Anime & Comics · BoxmanX
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    In the next episode of Dragon Ball Z

    Find Out
    Re:Zero Tortured
    Anime & Comics · Lemonman12
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    Giorno dies

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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    Did you just call the sekirei's homophobic? jk

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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    i swear everytime he makes that kuku noise, i cant help but imagine a chicken making noises

    "Kuku, fools, pay attention to me."
    WHAT THE HELL DID I GET MYSELF INTO!?
    Anime & Comics · HorusMundus
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  • Mr_nal
    Mr_nal1yr
    Commented

    This is just my opinion but maybe make the Hokage abdicate? I know it will be a mess to handle that and will make the story too complicated but at the end of the day, moving away from the canon. imo, makes the story more interesting and less predictable. Also, please let Danzo be killed for good. Don't Izanami him or something. Maybe only bring him back much later with Impure Reincarnation by someone but please don't make him come back for a long time

    At dawn, Jun still hadn't figured it out. He didn't know what he was going to do, what he was going to say, and who he was going to accuse. However, one thing was clear in his mind, he wasn't going to let them bury everything.
    The Fateful Uchiha
    Anime & Comics · MilexKor
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