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So, imma say it...the writing style feels like it is trying too hard to feel sophisticated but it isn't. This style of writing is more suited for a work that has ongoing ideological conflicts. But here it feels like it is forced. I mean the story and premise are good but it doesn't feel natural. The content and the writing style mismatch
i'd have to drop this i think
so a day is longer than 40 hours there? is this canon?
I wear them so people don't talk to me
i wanna see something new. so +1. Also I think it would be great if would great if you trie something new and not become like everyone else. So please try giving the mc and marie route a go.
shrine right?
....yes
i like the first one
Bruh Did ou took its entire stomach out? You know the 4d pocket is separate and can be removed right?
no. only do that after you are finished with marvel. imo
Uraraka*
didn't neji died in the fourth war? so this is an au then?
In the next episode of Dragon Ball Z
Giorno dies
Did you just call the sekirei's homophobic? jk
i swear everytime he makes that kuku noise, i cant help but imagine a chicken making noises
This is just my opinion but maybe make the Hokage abdicate? I know it will be a mess to handle that and will make the story too complicated but at the end of the day, moving away from the canon. imo, makes the story more interesting and less predictable. Also, please let Danzo be killed for good. Don't Izanami him or something. Maybe only bring him back much later with Impure Reincarnation by someone but please don't make him come back for a long time