if u can I would love your comments I'll be answering as many questions for the story so if you want know some pls ask 🙂

to everyone that's reading I want you to know that this is my first time writing my own novel and everything in my mind for this plot is in place it might not seem like it but I promise it will get better I plan on making 2 chapters a day and I welcome your criticism that help me make it better for those plan to stick it out your in for a surprise for the that's passing by have fun please show love

I find it beautiful yet I feel some how sad even for you as a writer your whole being is put into what you write so this hate this intent you must have gone thru alot